Reviews for Life After Forks
Queen Lily Tiger Ellyessa chapter 22 . 7/9/2009
I like this story, keep up the good work
yeelosub chapter 22 . 7/9/2009
love the story!

I am really looking forward to see where you are going to go with it!
lolafalana chapter 22 . 7/8/2009
I'm ready for some fighting... Good chapter.

If you don't mind - an error that you might want to fix:

you wrote:

Jasper and Alice exited through the window behind them and into the woods.

A few sentences later, Alice is suddenly back in the room and responding to a question:

"Alice, you didn't see this?" I realized she should have, she was keeping an eye out for it.

She looked over at Edward who looked guilty as all sin. "I knew. I also knew they weren't going there to hurt anyone, at least that wasn't their plan. We decided not to tell you..."

It should be a quick fix. Sorry, I love to over edit! :) Regardless, great work. Keep writing!
The Predatory Wasp chapter 22 . 7/8/2009
these past two chapters were really good.
Raven Jadewolfe chapter 22 . 7/8/2009
Ooh, I thought I saw some jelly on Edward's nose there for a second lol
My3chicks chapter 22 . 7/8/2009
Amanda Beth,

Great story so far! I can't wait to see where you take us!
MaryV121 chapter 22 . 7/8/2009
Do me! Do me!" gotta love Emmett. :-) I would love to have Gabriel's gift!
MaryV121 chapter 21 . 7/8/2009
Great chapter like always. Can't wait to see what happens in Australia. :-)
DanielWhite chapter 22 . 7/8/2009
excellent but will Bella become a queen though?
cascsiany chapter 22 . 7/8/2009
Keep up the amazing writing. Didn't get to last chapter til just before I read this one but it was great as well.
This Guilty Blood chapter 22 . 7/8/2009
great chapter! I love this story!
DanielWhite chapter 21 . 7/8/2009
Raven Jadewolfe chapter 21 . 7/8/2009
Nessie just slammed that girl rofl
littlemissliketofight chapter 21 . 7/8/2009
I still find Renesmee so strange in an undecided way... I do like Jacob in this though. x
lolafalana chapter 16 . 7/7/2009
Good chapter, but you do realize a porsche only has two seats, right? You said the rest of the family got in her Porsche. Must of been an interesting drive. :)
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