Reviews for Camerado |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was so well done, but it needs an epilogue! I'm deciding for myself that Severus comes to Australia to help her restore her parent's memories, then remains there to help her parents get readjusted to having their memories back. Now that it's proven he is alive, a trial is held in Britain and not only is he exonerated, he recieves and Order of Merlin, First Class, and returns with Hermione and her parents. Hermine and Severus marry, have two kids, and live happily ever after. |
![]() ![]() I liked it, but the romance part needs a lot of work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely wonderful. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() Ahhhhh! Loved this :) bravo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter is masterful. Goodness. |
![]() ![]() One of the best SSHG story I've ever read. I love the way you filled in the gaps of the canon, and the way you wrote Severus and Hermione's developing relationship was brilliant. It was slowburn but I'm happy that it wasn't TOO much of a slowburn where I'm writhing in pain from the slowness XD. The parts where they were longing for each other when Golden Trio were on the run had me in tears, and when they finally had all of each other during that scene on the cliff? *chef's kiss* I was giggling and kicking my feet like a crazy prepubescent girl lololol. Honestly it was almost perfect but you kinda lost me there with the chapters after Voldy's defeat. The ending felt a bit rushed for some reason and it wasn't satisfying as I hoped it would be. Don't get me wrong, I'm all for cliffhanger/open endings but I felt that the ending would've been more satisfying if you had Severus and Hermione reunited because of what they went through. Nevertheless, I love this story and thank you so much for creating ART. 333 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a good story. I love how you filled in the blanks. Seeing Severus's perspective and how everything tied into the story was a real treat. Good ending too. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So Hermione also had Bellatrix's vault key? Was that stuck to her clothes like the convenient hair? Or was the key Hermione's? This part just seems confusing. |
![]() ![]() You've sort of left us hanging, but - a very well written story, and I will be reading your other stories on the strength of this one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantastic from start to finish. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i honestly can't remember when was the last time i was so hooked on a story. your writing is very fluid and the characters were not ooc in the least. it was a pleasure to read your story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fuckity fuck yeah! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHXYJRSETJWTURYIW |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg YESSSS he has Hermiones note as a keepsake because hes a sentimental git. They’re figuring it out. Penny in the air. |
![]() ![]() ![]() These two idiots are sooooo in denial. I love them. And damn, Dumbledore is fucking ruthless. |