Reviews for Camerado |
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![]() ![]() ![]() These two idiots are sooooo in denial. I love them. And damn, Dumbledore is fucking ruthless. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The angst is angsting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YESSSSS this chapter! It is Very Good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ! AH MY HEART! I LOVE THIS SO MUCH! I DIDN'T MEAN TO STAY UP UNTIL 2:30 AM TO FINISH IT BUT HERE WE ARE AND I REGRET NOTHING |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love love love this storym i love how you intertwined it with canon and woved in a beautiful, slow burn romance. I love that Severus was true to character, he didn't just fall straight in love with her but over time with her actions and persistence. Thanks for sharing this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *standing ovation* I read this glorious epic in a single day and it's been a long time since a fic of this size kept me completely engrossed from start to finish. There's so much to love here: a delicious slow-burn kindled by mind magic that pays dividends when they become physically intimate as well, a believable and sympathetic treatment of both Harry and Ron, Hermione getting to be the only member of the trio in the Order (the necklaces!), that heartbreaking moment where Severus admits that he wants to live, Dumbledore's complex ruthlessness revealed, and a brilliant, determined Hermione bringing about so much more than Severus could have dreamed. I loved the empty spaces you filled with so much thought and care, from the effect of the Unbreakable Vow on Severus during the Sectumsempra incident, deficiencies in the Ministry's Apparition curriculum, uses and limitations of wards, Hermione's Amortentia smells, the Seven Potters, the implications of Dumbledore knowing wand and Hallows lore, Severus's relationship to the various Malfoys, and, well, if I listed everything that I found delightful and brilliant, this review would probably be as long as the story. I'm so very glad I finallly found my way to this wonderful story, and thank you so very much for the dedication, thought, and heart that you put into writing it. I know I'll be back to re-read. Bravissima! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Only thirty one chapters but the story was so great and intense, it feels like an another full length life. With ups and downs, joy and sadness, friendship and love. Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's a beautiful story but ending seems so like finished there should have been them meeting or something as in epilogue |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an absolutely beautiful and well-written story! Thank you so much for all the hard work you put into it and for sharing it with us. The previous reviewer really missed out on a wonderful HG/SS story by being impatient. |
![]() ![]() You made a Severus/hermione fic and still had her sleep with fucking Ron? Really? A lot of people like the ss/hg pairing because of how illsuited Ron is for her. I liked this story until that point, it was never explicit in the books, I had faith you would follow that but you had to bungle it up. I refuse to read more of the story, good day! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Incredible story; thank you for writing it and finishing it over such a long period! Really appreciated the slow build of HG & SS's trust, rapport, and attraction, and I loved your creative re-imaginings (esp inner dialogue of the characters) on various canon scenes ("the fucking Erumpent horn!"... absolutely could see Hermione thinking that!). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story! I loved how integrated with canon it was. Also impressive how you didn’t make Snape unbelievably nicer than in canon and still made such a beautiful romance, and also great characterisation of the trio |
![]() ![]() ![]() It’s like nobody cares that Draco was trying to use the Cruciatus curse on Harry. That would at least have been a good excuse for why Harry would not be punished as severely. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is everybody forgetting that Draco was trying to Crucio Harry first? As far as I’m concerned, he deserved anything Harry would have dished out. |