Reviews for Break Your 'Lil Heart
Cierra chapter 10 . 11/10/2013
You need to do at least a one-chapter sequel in Alex's POV! I want to see how you have him react when he find out what Jack did! please (:
theoriginalbreej chapter 10 . 3/5/2013
D': please dont die Jack! Alex! Dont let Jack die!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
OMFG, this is so dirty and wrong and I am slightly ashamed of myself as I couldn't fucking stop reading it...
Cynn101 chapter 10 . 8/6/2011
Omg :) that was amazing I Couldnt put it down at the end :) I was practically in tears lol keep up tge great writing I look forward to reading more of your work :3 Xxx
DaniPhantom2 chapter 1 . 6/29/2011
OH ! wait i found the sequel ! never mind _
DaniPhantom2 chapter 10 . 6/29/2011
oh my god you have to finish ! :O
xkissinthedark chapter 10 . 6/15/2011
jack...why...
xkissinthedark chapter 2 . 6/15/2011
such a cute little bromance :D
jackalope chapter 10 . 1/13/2011
please please please know that you are amazing:) this was so good, im gonna read the sequel now!
Lindseyx3 chapter 10 . 1/13/2011
I freaking love this! Just read the whole thing in one night, and I can't wait for more of your Jalex stories. Please keep them coming! And please write some juicy stuff with rian; he's my favorite boy hahaha.
Vi chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
That was extremely hot. I don't know how else to put it.

And dominant!Alex? Now that's something different.

About to read the sequel. :)
Merrikat chapter 10 . 1/7/2011
I hope you realise how freaking beautiful that was. I think my heart shattered at the end. Is this really the last chapter? Damn, I was hoping for more Jalex, or atleast some Rian/jack action hahaha:) and please, I need an explanation for that jack and zack sex near the start of your story; it was so fucking hot!

It's so beautiful the way you write jacks feelings, so descriptive and real. I really am looking forward to the possible sequel, and I will start a protest if you don't write more All Time Low stories! Twilight isn't really my thing hahaha. Thankyou for writing, I don't think you realise how much it can affect crazy fans like me. and thankyou for continuing, a lot of authors just stop and never start again:(

By the way, do you think that the atl boys have actually read this? I know they actually read some fan fics and they say that they enjoy them! I hope they get to read yours one day, because it is so freaking amazing! Xx
merrikat chapter 9 . 1/2/2011
this was so sad! rian left! :( and i love lullabies, its my favourite all time low song.

although very short, this chapter was still wonderfully written and nicely descriptive. the feelings of each mentioned character are described well, so i understand completely how they feel.

you had better write the next chapter quickly, but don't you dare make it the end! i will continually harass you until you write a sequel if you do! i love this story too much! thank you for writing this, i'm gonna check out your other stories while i wait for this next chapter :) x
merrikat chapter 8 . 1/2/2011
aw damn, i was hoping they'd all get up to something dirty after the girls got them drunk haha but i guess rian was there to save the day.

that dream of jack's gave me shivers, i was scared for him!

and oh my god rian! concussion? he's done? WHAT DOES THAT MEAN!

how could someone throw a bottle at alex? that so horrible! oh wait,... this is a fanfic haha :D

its so realistic, im getting so caught up in this. you're a beautiful author, but please dont let rian leave. i love him :(
merrikat chapter 7 . 1/2/2011
hahaha i've always wondered how all time low would react to reading a fanfic about them :)

im very jealous of that girl who got a hug from jack. i wish they'd come to a burger king near me sometime! ooh, what happened? im picturing all kinds of dirty things involving jack, alex, flyzic, zack and the girls haha:)

well written and so hilarious! never stop writing this fan fic! ever!
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