|Reviews for Dona Nobis Pacem|
| James Birdsong chapter 1 . 4/12
Wow. Good job.
| strange72191 chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
I like it, even though I don't do HG pairings. PoV could be improved a little for flow, but other than that, it'd be cool if it went on. Or, if it was instead another one-shot, instead of just running through the story again, just putting it at the end with a run-on type thing? Like, "I went back and look where it got me!" then the end of the thing. Something like that.
| OnlySnakesCanLove chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
I very much enjoyed this, especially well written and accurate to HG's story and characters. And I especially love the ending. It's both disturbing and hot. ;)
I think I'll go on assuming this is exactly what happens after Ending C. It's so much more fitting then "and they lived happily after." :)
| American Blondie chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
Wow! This is really good! :D
It's interesting to see what happened after Dona Nobis Pacem-wasn't that the one where you get the key from Debilitas, and escape through the locked shower cubicle? I'm forgetful :O