|Reviews for The Other Side|
| naru-chan 92 chapter 3 . 8/31/2009
plez update faster!
| Shina Suzuki chapter 3 . 6/6/2009
Good story. What will happen next?
Update soon, OK? And keep up the good work.
| Hyrulehalfbreed chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
I'm interested to see what happens next, please update soon! _
| hihazuki chapter 3 . 6/1/2009
Yeah, me too. Sometimes I wonder why Atlus had to make him the culprit. He's good-looking and goofy..*sigh*
And anyway... this is beginning to turn out interesting! The person Igor talked about... the one that had a less fortunate ending than Souji? I'm sure that's Minato! Yay, he's going to appear!XD
| Tohru Adachi chapter 2 . 5/31/2009
You're doing a very fine job. All of the characterizations seem to be very authentic, and the plot so far seems to be realistically in the vein of the two games. Keep it up, I'm excited!
| EshtarWind chapter 2 . 5/29/2009
You're doing good. Nice characterizations of each of them, you just need to deepen it a little. I love how you can differ the atmosphere between the two Persona series (the lighter feel of P4 and the darker feel of P3). A little more emotion narration won't hurt. But so far it's already a nice fic.
You can work on the battle scenes a little more though, by adding more dynamics so that the thrill will get though. Since it's still the beginning, there are still rooms for improvement in that part. :D
Ah well... that's just my opinion. XD Keep up the good work, and update soon! :)
| hihazuki chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
Now that I think about it, Dojima once said that the murders started when he first arrived in Inaba... Souji brings bad luck...lol
anyway, good beginning! keep going, k?