Reviews for Unforeseen Consequences
AcidESP chapter 14 . 7/1
good story, although I miss the romance and the lemon, a greeting, bye!
Eddyg125 chapter 1 . 1/6
A nice little story, well done
Chue19 chapter 14 . 11/22/2018
Aww lovely story u loved it
Chue19 chapter 10 . 11/21/2018
Nah uh i dont like naruhina
Guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2018
Please keep going I really liked the story please do sequal TY
Guest chapter 14 . 9/23/2018
That was disappointing, to end a love triangle problem by making it a harem story was a lazy way out. The story will have been far better if Naruto had made a choice, no matter which girl he chose.
You could have made an interesting story about friendship, love, the conflict between the two and their consequences, instead it's just some silly fantasy. Not particulary bad but not good either.
Once again : disappointing.
Guest chapter 14 . 8/25/2018
"She's right. Too bad we didn't know now what we knew back then." This sounds wrong to me. Shouldn't it be ("Too bad we didn't know back then what we know now."), just felt like I needed to point that out. Love your work though, you're an awesome author! This was a great fic.
arata7kasuga chapter 1 . 8/14/2018
I read the original of this and it was very good. I was interested in reading this one but it has Sakura in the pairing. :/ She, by no means, deserves Naruto one bit. Is it,by chance, just a small factor or is she a major part of the pairing?
ultrachols chapter 14 . 5/31/2018
Tamatoa chapter 14 . 5/27/2018
I've been thinking about the pros and cons of leaving a review for this for a while now. On the one hand I'm almost certain that this story's sequel is probably dead and I'll simply be wasting my time. On the other hand if it is dead then there's really no reason why I shouldn't leave a review since you'll probably never read this. On the other other hand, if it isn't dead, then that means you might read it and be inspired...

I love how you've combined this story with equal amounts of romance, humor, friendship, and drama. Making that work in a Naruto story is one of the hardest things to do. But you make it work easily.

I think that in the sequel you should let Hinata and Tenten into Naruto's, Sakura's, and Ino's relationship. I figure since he's already dating two of the female Konoha Genin, then it shouldn't really matter if they join in, should it? Might as well collect the full set and all that.
TrueRedDragonGodEmperor chapter 13 . 4/16/2018
I think the reaction of Hinata was unrealistic. I doubt she would have been so calm when talking to Naruto. She also would not have decided to move on so easily.
lucasrosa94 chapter 3 . 3/24/2018
kuraitja chapter 1 . 2/15/2018
hmm, it sounds more like she thinks of him as a prize that she can flaunt to sakura.
Thejoker7813 chapter 14 . 1/17/2018
Love it
Thejoker7813 chapter 14 . 1/17/2018
Love it a lot
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