Reviews for Unforeseen Consequences
nicknrm12 chapter 14 . 8/16
Awesome work! You manage to keep the story flowing without much difficulty. I loved how you made the harem realistic, by showing the complexities of three peoples feelings. To many stories have I read that the harem is merely slapped together. The females just flock to Naruto without so much as working out the details. One thing I wished you did was give a little more action on their relationship. Like more intimacy, not sex by no means, but simply Ino and Sakura providing more affection to him. I guess getting at least to second base since he has no experience with a woman. I'm glad that you did not make this into a porno with Naruto just having orgies with the girls. Well thought out story and very helpful in providing ideas for my own Naruto harem story.
JLdark chapter 14 . 8/7
What a great story, I enjoy reading every chapter, it heartwarming at times, not only that but funny too! I'd love to read that sequel in the future but for now, I'm happy how this ended, besides I like that not only you developed Naruto, Ino and Sakura relationship but Jiraiya and Tsunade too. Anyway amazing story! One of my favorites.
JLdark chapter 13 . 8/7
This was kind of fun, too many people would assume that Naruto is a playboy, at least with their friends they put things clear and no more trouble for them, kind of sad about Hinata, yet she still strong to take a new initiative for herself.
JLdark chapter 12 . 8/7
I'm happy for Naruto, both Jiraiya and Tsunade were worried about him, and trying to protect him in a way, it shows how much they care for him, and now that they are in a relationship even if it was difficult to tell their parents, it was a good choice.
JLdark chapter 11 . 8/7
Oh this was good! And both Ino and Sakura relieved Naruto of that difficult choice, it was a surprise, but a good one, I bet Jiraiya will be looking forward to use this as material for his new book. And that was funny, how they managed to trick Naruto, I do like the idea if how in sync are Ino and Sakura, thanks to sharing their memories, that helps them to understand each other better.
JLdark chapter 10 . 8/6
This was so raw in a emotional way, how Sakura and Ino shared thr memories and feelings about Naruto, I'm glad that they did it, it was hard for them but I think it was necessary for them to understand that they were for real and not playing with him. Still Ino got an idea that could work, and that should help Naruto, the poor guy must a headache telling what happened to Kakashi and Yamato, even if they didn't believe him at first.
JLdark chapter 9 . 8/6
This was the situation Teuchi was talking about, one of the biggest decision for Naruto, yet it was a great chapter how both Ino and Sakura did confess to him, it was heartwarming and special moments for the three of them. Good for Jiraiya too, he is passing the torch and what a better way to give Sai the mission, that way he can stay with his godson and better Tsunade, so satisfying to read this chapter, I did enjoy it a lot.
JLdark chapter 8 . 8/6
Well Naruto got his answer in a way, I did enjoy the Ichiraku Ramen scene, that was good and even Ayame teased him a little, now that he got that message from both Ino and Sakura, what he will do? I suppose he still a confused but I guess he will have to made a choice in the future.
JLdark chapter 7 . 8/6
Boy oh boy! This is getting exciting, I really enjoy how Sakura and Ino have these talks and then a complete change of behavior, good thing is that they are not letting their friendship go bad like the last time. And poor Chizune! Even if Jiraiya and Tsunade got together the poor girl just got an image that could be with her forever. Good thing that she told Naruto that little lie, the poor blonde would have been scared too, still is interesting how he looks for help even if is Sai, who is still learning about human behavior.
JLdark chapter 6 . 8/5
I'm glad for Tsunade and Jiraiya, they had a real talk about their feelings and maybe this would suspend his mission to Rain, besides he just got his fantasy made a reality, what a better way to get research for his next book, I'm really happy for them. And not only them but Naruto too, his training with Ino was fun, and that dinner with Sakura and her family was heartwarming, because she just made one of Naruto's dream come true.
JLdark chapter 5 . 8/5
That is great! Jiraiya came back and gave his godson some tips about his situation, not only that but I like that you are developing his relationship with Tsunade, after he died it was shocking for Naruto, but how Tsunade must have feel knowing that she was the one who made the mission for him, good for both of them. And now Naruto maybe not will be so oblivious to Ino and Sakura's advance for him.
JLdark chapter 4 . 8/5
Oh this was good, not only shows how serious is Ino about Naruto, but that makes clear to Sakura that she does not have to take Naruto's feelings for granted, great advice from Tsunade, and the best is that she still have time to fix her relationship with Jiraiya.
JLdark chapter 3 . 8/5
OK this was fun, can't believe that Ino and Sakura were fighting in a subtle way that even Naruto could not catch a word of what or better who they were fighting for. At least his subconscious did warn him what could happen to him in the future.
JLdark chapter 2 . 8/5
I like how Ino changed her idea of Naruto and that she takes Sakura's feelings in the matter, yet she has to be more direct with her fellow blond, I'm guessing Naruto doesn't have a clue he just got a date with her. By the way that scene with him trying to decide between pink and yellow was good, I'm surprised he choose the two, I guess it was the best choice.
JLdark chapter 1 . 8/5
After reading Naruto Hatake and it's sequel, I was looking your other works and a big surprise with this one, even if you adopted it I'm sure it will be a great story, I enjoyed the first chapter and how Ino discovered the truth about Naruto, and she was brave to face the Fox like that.
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