Reviews for Unforeseen Consequences
YeagerMeister31 chapter 7 . 10/15/2016
this was a funny chapter Ino and Sakura are funny Naruto is just clueless and Sai is just bizare
YeagerMeister31 chapter 6 . 10/15/2016
this was so cute Narut's so dense looking forward to the next chapter
YeagerMeister31 chapter 5 . 10/15/2016
this was a nice chapter it's so sweet if i was Naruto i'd date them both lol
YeagerMeister31 chapter 4 . 10/15/2016
this was a nice chapter a cool battle and some angst
YeagerMeister31 chapter 3 . 10/15/2016
well this was funny i'm enjoying this story so funny
YeagerMeister31 chapter 2 . 10/15/2016
well this was an interesting chapter can't wait for more
YeagerMeister31 chapter 1 . 10/15/2016
i really enjoyed this chapter can't wait for more
Rockman25 chapter 14 . 8/16/2016
Awesome work! You manage to keep the story flowing without much difficulty. I loved how you made the harem realistic, by showing the complexities of three peoples feelings. To many stories have I read that the harem is merely slapped together. The females just flock to Naruto without so much as working out the details. One thing I wished you did was give a little more action on their relationship. Like more intimacy, not sex by no means, but simply Ino and Sakura providing more affection to him. I guess getting at least to second base since he has no experience with a woman. I'm glad that you did not make this into a porno with Naruto just having orgies with the girls. Well thought out story and very helpful in providing ideas for my own Naruto harem story.
JLdark chapter 14 . 8/7/2016
What a great story, I enjoy reading every chapter, it heartwarming at times, not only that but funny too! I'd love to read that sequel in the future but for now, I'm happy how this ended, besides I like that not only you developed Naruto, Ino and Sakura relationship but Jiraiya and Tsunade too. Anyway amazing story! One of my favorites.
JLdark chapter 13 . 8/7/2016
This was kind of fun, too many people would assume that Naruto is a playboy, at least with their friends they put things clear and no more trouble for them, kind of sad about Hinata, yet she still strong to take a new initiative for herself.
JLdark chapter 12 . 8/7/2016
I'm happy for Naruto, both Jiraiya and Tsunade were worried about him, and trying to protect him in a way, it shows how much they care for him, and now that they are in a relationship even if it was difficult to tell their parents, it was a good choice.
JLdark chapter 11 . 8/7/2016
Oh this was good! And both Ino and Sakura relieved Naruto of that difficult choice, it was a surprise, but a good one, I bet Jiraiya will be looking forward to use this as material for his new book. And that was funny, how they managed to trick Naruto, I do like the idea if how in sync are Ino and Sakura, thanks to sharing their memories, that helps them to understand each other better.
JLdark chapter 10 . 8/6/2016
This was so raw in a emotional way, how Sakura and Ino shared thr memories and feelings about Naruto, I'm glad that they did it, it was hard for them but I think it was necessary for them to understand that they were for real and not playing with him. Still Ino got an idea that could work, and that should help Naruto, the poor guy must a headache telling what happened to Kakashi and Yamato, even if they didn't believe him at first.
JLdark chapter 9 . 8/6/2016
This was the situation Teuchi was talking about, one of the biggest decision for Naruto, yet it was a great chapter how both Ino and Sakura did confess to him, it was heartwarming and special moments for the three of them. Good for Jiraiya too, he is passing the torch and what a better way to give Sai the mission, that way he can stay with his godson and better Tsunade, so satisfying to read this chapter, I did enjoy it a lot.
JLdark chapter 8 . 8/6/2016
Well Naruto got his answer in a way, I did enjoy the Ichiraku Ramen scene, that was good and even Ayame teased him a little, now that he got that message from both Ino and Sakura, what he will do? I suppose he still a confused but I guess he will have to made a choice in the future.
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