Reviews for Unforeseen Consequences
Yondaimerocks56695 chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
This story is fucking beast! U better update this soon or im going to b pissed it is a great story line. U have very good grammar and a good vocab also. I commend u for a great story!
OverLordRevan chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
that sounds like a great chapter hop you update soon
pkp033 chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
pretty sweet
Demonkid chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
ooh... continue it well.
CelticReaper chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
hell yeah! _

update soon please
bandgsecurtiyaw chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
Interesting.
Elia950 chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
not bad.. really not bad.. personally i don't understand the obsession on making naruino fiction that start AFTER the timeskip of the training trip... but is good start fort this fiction..
Lady Laran chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
I am SERIOUSLY glad you picked the story up. I read this some time ago and have been waiting anxiously for more.
flavoroftheday chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
wow i havnt been blowin away by a story in a lng time
loneknight1012 chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
very nice. glad someone was able to pick this story up. It would have been sad if it was just left unfinished.
Sharingan-hater86 chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
now this looks like an interesting story can't wait to see where ya go from here ja nee
BMT and SuperMoose chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
Is the title an alternate spelling? I was unaware that there was more than one way to spell consequences.

Interesting beginning regardless.

-BlackMarketTrombones
KxR24 chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
I can't wait for the next chapter.
LightPoetry chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
This is Gaming Ikari's work, right? I assume you've talked with him, and are continuing it?
Gabo 1602 chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
Whoa! this was great! I'm gonna see if I can find the original. I hope you can continue along with this. It looks like a great idea!
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