Reviews for Meshii
bugaboo13 chapter 23 . 4/23
Hurry plz
wolf chapter 23 . 4/11
update senpai!
Guest chapter 6 . 2/28
It's pretty difficult to read, not by your grammar but the constant switching of tenses, if you're tending to write in third person make sure to always use past tense. Eg "The man ate" not the man was eating.
DokB chapter 7 . 2/21
This is becoming more difficult to read, grammar wise. I'm hoping that you will have gotten another beta in the later chapters as I see that you have a second one now and its only the 7th chapter. Gonna keep reading, thanks for the chapter.
DokB chapter 4 . 2/21
Excellent story that is continuing to get better the longer I read it. I tried to write something similar several years ago - based more on the hyuuga then daredevil, but I stopped after a couple of chapters. I'm hoping that naruto will learn bo-jutsu soon, that will be pretty cool. Thanks for the chapter and the story. Peace.
Seedy-acc chapter 23 . 2/15
This is a great story, I'm loving it so much, I really hope you'll update soon.
Guest chapter 23 . 2/11
Good. almost as good as the one who saw hell by the disturbed immortal*
Qinetiq chapter 16 . 2/5
Contains a dozen of decent ideas, but it is balanced by dozen of bad decisions. Overall passable, will be better after partial rewrite.
NarutoXHonoka chapter 23 . 2/2
wow. the Big Shot missing nin Die in lame way IoI. it's interesting, but it will become problem in the 4th SHinobi war, because without Orochimaru, the 1st,2nd , 4th Hokage will not Resurrected to help Shinobi alliance to win war with Madara. cause from the manga i see the scene where Madara said why he resurrected before the Juubi awaken, so i guess tobi mastered Edo Tensei, that will allow him to resurrected Madara Instead Kabuto. and so tobi/Obito can use Edo Tensei and resurrected many powerfull Shinobi instead Kabuto
NarutoXHonoka chapter 22 . 2/2
IoI even zetsu don't know it? is zetsu not seen their fight from afar? if i am not wrong Zetsu are very good tracker , he can feel bijuu cakra dozen KM from his place, he become one with earth to feel it :D anything that touch/connect with earth he can feel it and know the location, his sensory skill are above Samehada and Nagato who use rain.
NarutoXHonoka chapter 21 . 2/2
IoI they just show up for Killing Steal ahahahahah
NarutoXHonoka chapter 20 . 2/2
wow a bit different from Canon, it's interesting turn of event and i really can't wait to see what will happen next :D so let's read chapter 21 now :D
NarutoXHonoka chapter 19 . 2/2
a great chapter, with a good battle scene, it's so interesting and fun to read :D. but to bad i never seen his using the same Genjutsu like when he killed Mizuki IoI , a 9 taield fox eating you alive ahahahaha and i wonder when he will be using the 2 headed dragon again, i really want to see it :D
NarutoXHonoka chapter 18 . 2/2
interesting turn of event, i was surprised , that sasuke will know the truth about massacre so soon IoI and now Tsunade come back , also Naruto will get beating from Enma ahahahaha can't wait to see that ahahahaa :D
NarutoXHonoka chapter 17 . 2/2
a good chapter, it's interesting to read, but how will naruto paying the spy Network ? Jiraiya need to sell the ica ica series for his spy Network keep working ? i wonder what Naruto will do in the future , to make the Spy network active :D
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