How utterly cliche. A character with a dark power that is affected by their mood. How is that any different from the kyuubi's power. Super fast and unnecessary personality change.

why are his eyes green?

IF HE HAS NO TEAR DUCTS HOW ARE HIS EYES NOT CONSTANTLY DRYING OUT

Place him in an orphanage? why kind of hair-brained IDIOT idea is that?.. That's COMPLETELY STUPID.. At least this way, THEY HAVE to care for him! Where the HELL are all minanto's "FRIENDS"?.. The type of people that wouldn't give a TOSS what the "moron hokage" said! Some "beloved" ruler when everyone ABANDONS his kid! SCREW what he's thinking of them in the afterlife, HOW DO THEY LIVE WITH THEMSELVES?!(and yeah they are ALL most CERTAINTY GOING TO HELL) AND you think it's NOT going to make an IMPRESSION ON HIS KID? How is he gonna trust ANYBODY if he KNOWS the second he's out of the picture you'll DITCH everything you profess? CRAP IDEA all the way around! (not the story, CANON!).. It doesn't make ANY SENSE! Whatever the "plan" was, it SUCKED at the jump!

Naruto is a wimp

I hope you will update this story again, any who i hope Hiruzen will survive his battle with danzou can't wait to read more.

Naruto on team 8 story are boring why not just team 7 or a team of oc's

Are you going to finish this story?

One of the best story i readed on this site. Wow perevert as hokage hahahaha great move, i screamed into heavens how hehehe. cant wait for the next chapter.

I do like this story, but I find it a bit UNBELIEVABLE... #1. There is NO WAY sarutobi would ALLOW it to happen, he MAY let naruto get beaten, but to allow this is to allow ALL the other villages to descend on the leaf and burn it to the ground. So no... #2. Uzumaki healing almost assures this is IMPOSSIBLE. It's not WOLVERINE style speed healing, but it WOULD eventually heal him. #3. wouldn't kyuubi just let him see out of it's eyes?(other then let him be an EVEN MORE PATHETIC HOST).. Remember he has TWO pairs of eyes all in all, and you can't really blind a giant CHAKRA MONSTER that has NO physical ORGANS!

i don't know why but i lost my interest in this chapter and i gonna move on to another

i would like to see naruto can light as you call it or yang as it's known so he could do some sick yin and yang release stuff perhaps even nullify all ninjustu on himself except sage infused jutsu

I like your idea's with yin chakra like to see some mixing of yin and other elements however it doesn't make sense because yin isn't body thats yang which makes more sense in this situation but whatevvvvssss

ty for not going with the original team it's gonna be so much better this way without sakura however i think shika would have been better compared to shino but hey it makes sense for ino-shika-cho formation and all that shit

great so far im hoping for the shit to go down kill someone he loves or maybe have him get tortured to lose himself have him go rogue nin in future hahah i'm an evil bastard

great start wonderful can't wait to see a sage mode blind naruto fucking destroy with his super senses etc also tsunade could fix his eyes seeing how almost all naruto characters swap eyes like a piece of gum would love to see sharingan naruto

after reading nidaime no sairin I had great expectation from I think I overestimated it.