|Reviews for Naruto, the Genius Ninja of Konoha|
| namikazestorm chapter 2 . 6/3/2009
Great I like it so far cant wait for more, I also like the idea of Sakura and Naruto not liking each other till later on, I think its a great idea, good luck!
| Sillusion chapter 2 . 6/2/2009
I love it.
I was a bit unsure at first as I wasn't sure about the first person narrative, but you've definitely made it work.
Kudos on brilliant opening chapters!
Now your only problem is this: Bringing out the next chapter for the readers (like myself) who just can't wait for more.
| NannyKiwiGurl chapter 2 . 6/2/2009
ha its ok they still have to become friends right? so yeah gradually is sometimes better
| SyntheticGenius chapter 2 . 6/1/2009
The first two chapters look like a good start to an interesting story. I'm interested in seeing how you reveal Kyuubi to Naruto, not to mention when.
What really interests me so far is that you tried to balance giving Naruto a family and still have him be treated differently because of the Kyuubi, I look forward to seeing how those interactions play out.
| nathaniel smith chapter 2 . 6/1/2009
this chap is pretty awsome i like the way u wrote the bell test and made it to were it was kiba that stayed behind to fight the sensei instead of naruto wel what did u expect from a genius he wont be so fast to get into a fight
| nathaniel smith chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
nice chapter i love how u put naruto kiba and sakura on a team with jiraya as there sensei
| xXYamchaXx chapter 2 . 6/1/2009
I don't really care at all about what the pairings are, the story is quite good so far, it is far better then the normal first person view story. You writing skills are quite good as well, I wish you luck with this story in the future.
| tennisdesi91 chapter 2 . 6/1/2009
Great job with the chapter. I think it was generally well done. The fight scene had a good amount of detail and you're doing a good job with developing itra-team relations. Keep up the good work! post soon!
| dbzgtfan2004 chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
This is a good story. Please continue. Naruto and Sakura forever.
| tennisdesi91 chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
hm. Pretty interesting start you have here. i can't wait for the next chapter. Post soon.
p.s. good job with characterization in the beginning with naruto.