Reviews for Along Came a Family |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really hope you finish this. It is well written and the attention to detail is very good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd been reading this story for days on end and enjoying it wery much. Usually I don't prefer Severitus stories cause there often Lily's or Jame's actions make me uncomfortable. But this story provides with such a reasoning behind their actions that you can feel real sympathy towards all of the characters. Jame's fidelity and honour, Lily's desperation to save her loved ones, Severus' bitterness, Sirius' jealousy - all that makes this story breathe. And of course it's interesting to follow Severus' and Harry's relationship dynamics. It heartens to see how Ron and Hermione continue to stick to his friend no matter what. I'll keep my hopes high to sometime see new chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have read this multiple times but i still adore this scene every single time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have read this story a few times and always enjoy it, I would just like to know when the story will continue as I am excited as to what happens next in the storyline. I am also curious as to how the story would end. Keep up the good work . |
![]() ![]() I said it on your other story, but I’m sorry for your loss. God bless you and your family. I’ve loved reading your work, and I looked up “nequam nota” and that was brilliant! Love it! I can imagine the sour faces some in that set might have every time they return to the common room. Nothing like Snape thumbing his nose at Voldy and making a point at the same time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm obviously overtired, because that last scene with the speeches has me crying like an idiot. God I know I'm about to come to the end of what's available, and I just have to hope that one day you will indeed come back to this story. I will await that day. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's been a while since you worked on this story, but... when I come to this chapter in my re-reading, it's always this chapter that is my absolute favorite. The last 3 paragraphs always melt my heart...and when Severus puts a pillow on his lap for Harry and falls asleep with his sons' head on his laptop it really makes me regret not having the ability to draw, because I can see the image so vividly but would love the ability to put the image to paper... You paint such a beautiful picture with this chapter. Thank you so much for letting us experience this story. It is one of my favorites and always will be. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope you come back to this soonI really love this story and it’s so well written |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ron and Hermione's characters are impeccably written! Perfect! I could imagine hearing theor voices! Just love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE this story! I really enjoyed seeing how Severus and Harry's relationship has grown. I hope the muses inspire you to continue soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh please continue muses help |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hope you pick this back up - it’s so good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this, its all very well written. but, its been over a year now, wheres the next chapters (i mean this in a lighthearted way.)? i hope youre well though. |
![]() ![]() this is my absolute favorite snap/harry fic! it’s so well written and perfect! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Por favor continúa, estoy muy intrigada por la historia, la amé y perdón por escribir en español, irónicamente no soy muy buena con la escritura en Inglés como con la lectura. |