Reviews for Shoot First
Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
amazing
Ilikeit chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Well I think the nonlinear thing worked perfectly :)
mercury chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
Eee! Thanks!
Silvanesti chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
Wonderful!
jessica499499 chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
I like the line about Spock being jealous of Jim's anger. Very Spock sounding. Jim was also very in character. Well done.
Momma Lici chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
Hot damn, this was good. Funny, even.
Doni chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
Great last line. The structure worked really well. Loved it!
roswellwbfan chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
I liked the final sentence best, it was rather poetic.
Sylar221B chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
hehe "Spock bristled. The captain had violated his personal bubble." I can just picture Spock pouting and declaring that Kirk invaded his personal bubble! Cute!
Fernsfairie chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
I like the nonlinear-ness of this. It makes sense... sort of?

~Fern Rose
Llama chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
Aww. That's sweet:) Great fic!
Alhena-star chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
I loved it! *o*

Specially when Kirk said “Don’t call me Captain. You’re the one on top.”

jajajaja

Wonderful!
Lover of Angelus chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Lovely little pictures are floating around inside my head. Thank you for that

-Lover of Angelus
Blue-Eyed Chica chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
love it!
chocolatelover1 chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
Cute. Very cute.

Awesome job. :D
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