|Reviews for Shoot First|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
| Ilikeit chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
Well I think the nonlinear thing worked perfectly :)
| mercury chapter 1 . 6/11/2013
| Silvanesti chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
| jessica499499 chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
I like the line about Spock being jealous of Jim's anger. Very Spock sounding. Jim was also very in character. Well done.
| Momma Lici chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
Hot damn, this was good. Funny, even.
| Doni chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
Great last line. The structure worked really well. Loved it!
| roswellwbfan chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
I liked the final sentence best, it was rather poetic.
| Sylar221B chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
hehe "Spock bristled. The captain had violated his personal bubble." I can just picture Spock pouting and declaring that Kirk invaded his personal bubble! Cute!
| Fernsfairie chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
I like the nonlinear-ness of this. It makes sense... sort of?
| Llama chapter 1 . 11/7/2009
Aww. That's sweet:) Great fic!
| Alhena-star chapter 1 . 9/20/2009
I loved it! *o*
Specially when Kirk said “Don’t call me Captain. You’re the one on top.”
| Lover of Angelus chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
Lovely little pictures are floating around inside my head. Thank you for that
-Lover of Angelus
| Blue-Eyed Chica chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
| chocolatelover1 chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
Cute. Very cute.
Awesome job. :D