Reviews for Desperation
turtlelover chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
awwwwww, poor guys
turtlelover chapter 1 . 10/28/2014
id be glad to read what you put out for us. loved your story. poor guy that got shot
Cocoaflower chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
Aww... the turtle tots are so adorable!
LovePeaceandMusic chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
Amazing! I absolutely love the turtle tots, maybe more stories about them? *cue puppy dog eyes*
The Last Ambassador chapter 1 . 7/16/2009


Oh, my...

...this was one of the better Splinter-and-young-turtle fictions I have seen in quite awhile. Interesting taste and artistry, and I admire your ability to keep two ideas spinning in the same plot with one another in harmony.

And, well...the turtle chibis...sigh...I might as well say this with as much decorum as possible...


Yay, turtle babies and their nicknames! Yay, their cuteness! Aw...handing Splinter a can...I'm terribly sorry they got sick, however. What a pity...the rat's devotion is very admirable indeed.

Excellent job. I will be waiting for more of your work in the future.

#The Last Ambassador signing off#
HeiressOfSoup chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
Wow, this was one of the best turtle tot fics I have ever readXD It was so sad and sweet:)
Second daughter of Eve chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
Wow, this is sad. I've often wondered what Splinter did whent hey were little, and I like your answer the best.

Agent66 chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
I enjoyed this. It was a good POV from Splinter, especially in the early days. I definitely liked how you didn't give the turtles names right away. Most stories have it where he just stumbles across that ren book while the boys hadn't even walked yet.

I wouldn't mind seeing more of if you decide to do another one shot. Very good.
Mikell chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
Oh my goodness, this was so sad, and so very well written. I hate that Splinter blamed himself for the man's death, but understand where the feelings came from. His sense of honor would indeed make him feel responsible.

I'd love to see more if you write them.

Rejoicing in the day,

Kyaserin Marii chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
Oh wow, I don't think that I blinked the whole time I was reading this. I would love to read more from you. Please, please continue.
candelight chapter 1 . 5/27/2009



IT WAS THE BEST TURTLE TOT FICTION I HAVE EVER READ! Holy crow...I am not sugarcoating. I'll PM in a moment...

But here, publicly, I will say it: That was incredibly sweet! You brought up many points and references from the turtles' personalities, Master Yoshi and Matshimi...

Splinter's own memories, his ideas, his thoughts, doubts, shame, fear, devotion, heart...

(And that dedication was very sweet. It was a wait well wort my while.)

I'm off to PM! Adios, and keep writing! :) :) ;)
54Viruses chapter 1 . 5/27/2009
I'm not sure exactly what to say, all I can say though is that I enjoyed this story and it definitely gave me something to think about.