Reviews for SR: Taylor's Revenge
Guest chapter 7 . 7/1/2014
Hey! I am reviewing to say... number one: GOOD JOB on this AWESOME story! number two: I will ask you to PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEE with a whole jar of cherries on top update this! This is my favorite Speed Racer story! number three: I will give you some ideas that you may use or use part of them or none of them (lol) Okay. So first of all I think that you could pull this in a bit of a more serious/extreme adventure and let one of Taylor's guys get speed racer and sort of torture him? (remember you can completely ignore my ideas if you don't like them lol) but ya know It could be like what Royalton had said in the movie that he'd prefer that Speed didn't make it out of the locker room, and have the guy or guys grab him just as he is going to his car and chain him down and injure(Torture) him (not maim him or anything) and leave him in the locker room for Rex and security to come find him, take him to the hospital, then after he recovers have him kinda come back "stronger" than before? or if you wanted to drag it out more and dabble in a PTSD-Speed you could have him come home after the hospital and then Taylor could take him and he and his hench men torture Speed at his head quarters and then he gets rescued and THEN comes back as A racing hero? or It could be a public torture and one of the drivers somehow makes the Mach 6 to crash on the track and as Speed's kind of in a hazy shock from the crash the bad guy driver pulls him out of the car (and the bad guy could have some kind of a microphone on him so that everyone can hear whats going on) and uses fancy restraints that attach to the track and chain Speed down then cuts his jacket and shirt off and then proceed to (for example) use an advanced taser that has the power of an electric chair, and dislocate his shoulder and/or knee, break some of his ribs, cut him, etc.. just whatever you want to use but if you do want to do this just please don't make the torture too Insane (if ya know what I mean like no finger nail pulling or medieval stuff) like if you've seen star trek (2009 version) the torture they used on Captain Pike was really strange. lets make our characters look like a "hot mess" not just a mess please LOL! like I said if this is too weird and you think this review belongs in a mental hospital then by all means don't do it and please just update with your own ideas, but if you do like my ideas then PLEASE update soon! Thank you! 3 :D
Guest chapter 7 . 2/19/2014
I like it. It sounds really good. Please continue.
MissAntelope chapter 1 . 2/18/2013
Suspenseful, nice job!
sckraut12 chapter 7 . 7/23/2012
Please continue. I like how is going. Please let the rest of the family find out.
LTA chapter 7 . 6/27/2012
Oky so i know it's been like two years since you updated but it's really good and I think you should finish it...but of course that's only my opion
AngelEyes chapter 7 . 6/6/2010
This is a really good story. I love the interactions between both X and Speed as well as Speed and Trixie. This story has the perfect mix of action and romance. Love it and cant wait for more. Update soon please :)
JediMagnet09 chapter 7 . 5/14/2010
PLEASE KEEP WRITING! I'm dying to know what happens! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE! :)
Gentlelady chapter 7 . 1/10/2010
So, the Mach 5 is as good as trash. Go, Speed, Go.

Very well done. Please write more soon.
lcopperfield chapter 7 . 1/5/2010
Ohh, boy! This is the kind of action I like! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Rangerfan58 chapter 7 . 1/4/2010
well it's good that you're back a few things it took you a while for inspiration and this was a very good chapter i like how speed just set up a VERY good trap oh and snake is a big creep attacking when speed is sleeping at least speed has his older brother to protect him well can't wait for more
Nierx chapter 6 . 7/5/2009
Dun dun dun...Finally-Rex admitted the truth!

I like your writing style. It's very quirky-like the movie/series!

Alert'd

Nierx out.
Rangerfan58 chapter 5 . 6/20/2009
nasty well can't wait for more
Gentlelady chapter 5 . 6/20/2009
Excellent! Please keep it going.
Gentlelady chapter 4 . 6/10/2009
I like what you are doing with Racer X and I am glad to see Spritle and Trixie acting in character. Keep it up.
Rangerfan58 chapter 4 . 6/10/2009
yeesh things just keep happening oh and you spelled Knew with a j not a k
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