|Reviews for Magic and Loss|
| warperchick chapter 10 . 12/7/2012
loved your story bro! :)
| Stobene chapter 10 . 1/24/2012
Wow. So glad I took a chance on this! I totally don't go for autobot-heavy, and certainly not these two as main characters, but the story itself was absolutely fantastic and I was gripped from the start. I love the attention to detail, the characterization, and the fact that you didn't make Sunstreaker a total asshat! Wonderful!
| Moonlight black rose chapter 10 . 8/30/2011
aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwww ending so adorable!
| Patcher chapter 10 . 4/12/2011
This was a really wonderful read. It was touching; and the title fits this fic real well. Magic and Loss indeed. Awesome work. :)
| arctapus chapter 2 . 10/27/2010
This line has stayed in my head all day today:
A beat of silence hit the room, then suddenly everyone seemed to speak at once: "Sunstreaker!"
I love this fic.
| arctapus chapter 8 . 10/27/2010
no one can hear you scream in space ...
| arctapus chapter 6 . 10/26/2010
holy crap. you really know how to kick someone in the head. poor wheeljack. then sunny coming back and all this. Sideswipe and Ratchet are an awesome pairing. I just love this fic, its so real.
| arctapus chapter 4 . 10/26/2010
sniffle. this is lovely. I almost feel the most pity for old sunny. he just can't bend. bluestreak would have been good for him but he didn't want to change or he couldn't. can't wait to see more.
| arctapus chapter 3 . 10/26/2010
BWAHAHAHA! This is so wonderful I wish I knew two other languages to tell you how. This is such a fabulous concept but then that is what you do. The creativity of this, the 'humanity' of this, watching little Blue become a mech with a purpose and poor Wheeljack, I love it. I wonder when Prowl is going to unsub his rifle.
| arctapus chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
You have them right. i love bluestreak and the others? They are spot on in my opinion. Poor blue, so sweet and so insecure. This is wonderful. You do interpersonal relationships and appropriate dialog so damned well. Its joy to read your stuff.
| Artemis1000 chapter 10 . 12/16/2009
What a beautiful story! Once I'd started reading it, I could barely tear myself away from the computer anymore and went to bed way too late so I could finish it *laughs* This delicious cocktail of angst and fluff was just what I needed on a bad day yesterday, like eating really good chocolate!
I really love how you describe Transformer pregnancy, both the actual spark pregnancy (absolutely love the way you found to incorporate robot mood swings!) with spark separation as "birth" and the protoform building with its own risk of deformation if the protoform is inferior. The way you write it, it's close enough to human pregnancy/birth to sympathize and empathize, but it still has a distinct "alien robot" feel to it.
I'm really happy that Sunny decided to be a part in Silverwind's life. I reckon he'll make a far better "cool uncle who lets you get away with everything" than father. It's funny, somewhere along the way I really wanted to join Blue in shooting at Sunny, but you made me forgive him in the end... though I wanted to go back to shooting him when I thought he's trying to win Blue back. When he said that he doesn't even know himself what he wants, I felt some pity for him. I wonder if he'll ever regret that he blew his chance.
| pickwickpirate chapter 10 . 7/31/2009
Aww who cares if it was melodramatic? It was happy, sure they may not have their peaceful lives for ever, but they're making the most of what they have, it's hopeful :) and i for one am one of those people who becomes so lifted by a happy ending.
| Beregond5 chapter 10 . 7/27/2009
Aw... it's over. I loved the bonding ceremony, there was a lot of detail in it that I thorougly enjoyed! And I'm glad Wheeljack found Moonracer again. :)
| BiloxiBlueberry chapter 10 . 7/23/2009
*cracks up at her comment about changing her name to "Drama Queen"* Thanks for putting up an epilogue. I now have warm fuzzies.
| Carmilla DeWinter chapter 10 . 7/23/2009
Yes, it's drama, but if anyone indulged in it with your quality of storytelling, the world would be a better place.
That said, I'll 'aww' to myself some more and eagerly await more of this little AU.