|Reviews for Inseparable|
| luluhrh chapter 1 . 1/21
whoa. . . so did they mix themselves or something? i'm kind of confused.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2014
Congratulations, you have managed to confuse me tremendously.
Seriously, I don't get it. Is it Al or Ed? Or are they the same? What? The cat comment was great, by the way, but that makes me even more confused.
| Gamma Cavy chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
so Ed and Al somehow merged, with probably Ed's body transmuted into Al's, but Ed was still there so when Al was bound to it this new person, Ed/Al, was made?
| dhampire712 chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
I really don't get that last paragraph but still interesting to read
| rezzkat chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
Sweet, and I could see it happening so good job. The writing was nice and I liked how you wrote the character's personalities.
And the ending sentence was nice, Al just has to have cats :) it's cute.
| Flickering Ember chapter 1 . 2/16/2013
Al always did have a weakness for strays... He'll probably end up picking the cats up off the streets instead of visiting a pet store.
| rainbowMonstrosity chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
I'm confused...Is Ed in Al's body? Or vice versa? Or...what?
| sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
Oh wow. Really intriguing idea... I really liked it. You did a fantastic job of writing this, hinting but still keeping it vague.
Man, haha, I really, really like this. Thank you so much for writing!
| Remniscent Shadow chapter 1 . 7/7/2011
I'm a little lost, i get the idea that the boy is neither al or ed? is that it? or a mixture of both? would you mind explaining, i really like it and would like to figure it out, please :D
| awesomenaruto chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
In this fanfic is ed in al's body? I don't understand who the main character is, but i really like the story.
| Creamy chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Bittersweet. Cute ending
| RainFlame chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
I really enjoyed this fic as well - Again, very well written.
| FlaxDragons chapter 1 . 7/2/2009
Oh my god. Allow me a brief and rare fangirl moment... Okay. These kind of things just remind me how sad the end was, and how it kind of sucked that they skipped over the reunion. But I love the take on Al and how his brother and him were similar, despite the fact they were not. you writing in a sense of grammar and spelling was amazing. It was a wonderful releif from some of the stuff that is out there now. I congratulate you.
| Vi-Violence chapter 1 . 6/12/2009
kinda scary, but i'm suprised no-one has thought of that before
| Katie chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
What an alternate ending! I really liked it, even if it just a tiny bit creepy. This was a very nice read!