|Reviews for Deus ex Evangelion|
| Akuma-Heika chapter 8 . 3/11
Did it eat the S2 Organ as well?
THOUGH the paintjob was somewhat lacking
Pretty sure Asuka would know it’s a cyborg and thus has a brain.
From what we have seen I doubt she would dismiss Unit 02 so easily.
Surprised Fuyu would be callous to the child of the woman he claimed to have loved; her last physical trace. Your Gendo actually having some feelings for Shinji fits canon to a degree though.
EVERYTHING about Unit 01 was nice
Own A.T. FIELD now neutralized
Ayanami I not e
Was actually AMERICAN
How did she pick up her knife so quickly?
Would Ramstein even be alive (let alone active) the world’s population was reduced by 3 billion people or so during 2nd impact and events that came after.
The axe monitor comment was funny. Too bad we cannot copy and paste anymore I am very curious about the german message lol.
Just gotta SPEND
Hahahahaha 255 thousand dollars in one day…
Concerning the ANGEL
Why would her hands be burned? She doesn’t have to do as a mime to make the field and even if she did her hands are on two different sides of her body.
It would destroy the Eva Core before her plug in that scenario
Thank God” in this situation it is a proper noun since it is a name.
Its core though is in the chest but it is connected to the entry pug so his soul would also be filtered through her.
When will Asuka ask what Shinji thinks about Rei?
All to lucky PREY
Isn’t Misato the Operations Director? She was either amused or bored that she had to sit through that…probably both at least at first
SIGH once more
Gored it with a tower?
How could Toji figure out she had a second previous paycut?
Considering that Warhammer was probably forgotten I find it unlikely. The fact she was, for all intents and purposes, raised by a Judeo-Christian Organization and a born American would suggest she has Christian leanings (whether she is a practicing Christian is another story). Most likely with all the crap she has lived through she would be an agnostic.
Shinji is having a lot of fun and I am enjoying Toji’s torment
THOUGH the face
Considering she figured out Shinji was acting strange because he was jealous I am surprised she hasn’t figured out the same for Hikari. She is a Genius.
Given name not forename
SIGHED and stood up
What was her synch ratio in 02? If she had vertigo from the height change that would suggest 100%
The ofuda bit was funny
THOUGH I had
I swear to God, First
Would Rei blush from a sexual innuendo? Why didn’t Hikari blush?
Please for all that is Sacred and Vile, continue this fic! This fic is DEFINITELY in my Top 5 Eva fics probably Top 3. I sincerely hope you continue it. IF Shinji’s new body has Lilith’s DNA taking up his father’s genome for the most part he will practically be Rei’s full brother. That would be interesting. With how your Rei has come seeing some ShinAsuRei would be nice as well. Will he obtain Adam? More specifically will he become a god? His soul would logically be strengthened after his new life. So many questions that will only be answered if you finish it. Even a chapter every few months would be nice. If you are having troubles in RL I will pray for you though. That seems to be one of the major causes of authors just stopping their work.
| Uraharaisgod chapter 8 . 2/11
Very interesting story, it doesn't really read as an Evangelion FF should, your characters have much more solid psyches, rather than being the psychological messes that they were in canon, Shinji in particular seems extraordinarily stable considering his situation is so wrong, while Rei seems to be most of the way onto having an acceptably normal if minimal attitude to the world. Then again, with Shinji's situation, I guess the almost integrated connection between Pilot and Eva had lead to him stabilizing way more than canon would have allowed, plus with no way to escape, he has no choice but to take everything head on which has lead to his mental state being stronger.
Still, even if OOC is a tad strong, it's not in a bad way necessarily as your characters are enjoyable to read and believable, its a nice take on the canon version. Would like to see this completed some day, to find out what exactly happens to Shinji, discover how events change because of this.
Very interested in seeing how the later Angel battles went, all the ones before those were simply normal battles in a sense, it was after this point that things would have had to change a lot, excluding Sahequiel, all of the next ones would have been drastically different due to how they were more psychological or technological.
Again, would like to see more anyway. Also wonder what's going to happen when Asuka inevitably ends up seeing *that room*. Also curious to see what happens between Kaoworu and the gang, will he latch onto Asuka or Suzuhara, or maybe wildcard it entirely and have him latch on Rei?
| Uraharaisgod chapter 2 . 2/10
...pray tell how did he get plug-suit measurements? They don't exist, excepting height possibly, there aren't any measurements needed as they are vacuum sealed once active, hence why Shinji basically got away with wearing Asuka's spare suit when they first met in the anime.
| Xahn777 chapter 8 . 11/3/2013
Twas quite good. Any chance its not d-e-d dead?
| vox ad umbram sum chapter 8 . 10/30/2013
A truly original story. I really hope you haven't given up on it, This is really very good.
| JackFrost21 chapter 8 . 10/28/2013
| Materia-Blade chapter 7 . 8/17/2013
Any chance this fic is up for adoption? Two years with no new chapters makes me sad. Its such a great fic. I'd be willing to continue writing it if you'd let me.
| aCEMANIa chapter 8 . 7/4/2013
Another great sent to the land of Dead Fanfictions.
| BML2400 chapter 8 . 6/8/2013
Argh, you should update this. I have to know how it ends!
| Fireminer chapter 8 . 5/26/2013
So magnificent. Too bad this is dropped. Hope some day you can finished this.
| starburst98 chapter 8 . 5/11/2013
this is pretty funny
| Gxmwp-Arisa chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Loving this so far
| johndoe91 chapter 5 . 4/29/2013
This is a really interesting original idea. Admittedly it's much sillier than the original series but I think you pull it off nicely. The ending to this chapter though? Hilarious. And easily my favorite bit so far.
| SoulCake chapter 8 . 3/29/2013
I thoroughly enjoyed reading the story; both the writing and the concept are excellent. It's unfortunate the author seems to have gone silent, however.
| Gemini011 chapter 8 . 3/27/2013
It is a real pity that you seem to have stopped updating this story.
I have to say I'm impressed with how good it is, especially considering that English is not your first language... do you know how many people grow up in America (or England) without being able to write anywhere near this well?
This is a really interesting idea, and your execution is great. Characterization early on felt a little off, but got better fast. I really like the interactions and slowly growing relationship between Shinji and Asuka, and I wish there were more of it to read.
Thanks for writing!