Reviews for Naruto: Red Dawn
goldenlucario1 chapter 8 . 7/26/2013
What's happening to Hinata?! : (
goldenlucario1 chapter 6 . 7/26/2013
I don't like Hinata and Naruto...I hope their friends can bring them back and "cure" them...
goldenlucario1 chapter 5 . 7/26/2013
I thought that I would never say this but I like this fanfiction he's being reasonable. Oh, and Hinata has got Gaara's sand powers now, but I think his powers didn't come from the demon! 'Cause when they removed the one-tailed Gaara still had his sand powers...I'm confused...but anyway, epic fanfic! It's really interesting! : )
goldenlucario1 chapter 4 . 7/25/2013
Whadda you talking about, 'not the best chapter'? It's awesome! This story's great! : )
goldenlucario1 chapter 3 . 7/25/2013
Wow, that's all I can say...this fic's amazing...
Clove15 chapter 1 . 7/4/2011
Bastered I shall forever hate Danzo's way's .
Angels will bleed from pain chapter 8 . 2/28/2011
Man wats goin to happen now hinata that is
naru7 chapter 8 . 8/27/2010
I really would love to have, the tv show like this.
hollow-kyuubi chapter 8 . 7/14/2010
you should have sasuke join and give him the three tailed turtle
naruto no juubi chapter 8 . 6/22/2010
you can say that again update soon
xxSnowxxAngelxx chapter 8 . 6/21/2010
Yay, the story was updated! I almost forgot that i was reading this one since its been so long! Please update soon!
Thorn In Your Side chapter 8 . 6/19/2010
Fee! Are you fillering us or is this the start of a subplot? :D

Anywho~ My gripe of the chapter is right here: "Everyone knew exactly what she was, and likely who she was and what she held inside her."

When they know exactly what she is then surely they also know exactly who she is and what she holds? Likely isn't necessary, is what I'm saying.

"The canyon walls passed by quickly, stone pathways winding between strange, alien looking constructs of rock, carved millennia ago by forgotten rivers." I love that sentence and wish we could get more of its ilk~ In this chapter sometimes it felt like all dialogue and no description. I for one cared to hear more of the Suna street and the noise and bustle of a city. Ya ken? XD

I can't actually remember who Amaya is. -_- I'm going to read this over from the beginning.

Is SW due for an update next?
Moriko no Hikari chapter 7 . 5/29/2010
...Fee, continue this. Seriously. It's pretty good!...Just, tone Hina-chan down a touch, hey?
Black Ace 0 chapter 1 . 5/8/2010
Silvar Sunstrider chapter 7 . 4/16/2010
*Jumps up and down* Hurry, write the next chapter! XD
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