Pity, novel was great until this cliche bs just added in for drama. It completely undermined the whole bond by making it so easily broken here, Harry in this ended up even worse than canon one.

Brummagem? Since when was Harry from Birmingham?

Professor Hedwig?

Poor H & Hr. Not a moment to spare. All that studying for 3rd year must be taxing for their NEWT level brains . Oh wait. They've got a "house" that makes 15 minutes into a week. A week of rest, relax and quality time together. YOU REALLY HAVE A PRETTY GOOD STORY but the many many plot holes I try to ignore become distracting.

Forgot Scabbers already or just giving him the fanfic staple time to make a run for it?

It almost seems like H & Hr are blatantly oblivious. Ron was practically their ONLY friend and he is frequently a jerk. Why don't they suspect him as a betrayer? Crookshanks outright told them Scabbers is an Animagus. Why can't they put the gigantic flashing 2 2 together? They are just okay with an unidentified Animagus living in Gryffindor tower? They desperately need to find the RAT with a missing toe. Oh, it's just a coincidence that the rat they've seen a million times has a missing toe. . AND they've not noticed Pettigrew's name when searching the map. And are thy really going to spend the next year or 5 years pretending there's an actual point of sitting in class all day if they can just take their NEWTs now. Hmmm

Dropped

Love your story.

The plot suffered greatly because character arguments were much more important . Glad I skipped over many chapters . What a waste of time .

how is dumbldore lying under truth potion before dumbldore said hey knew about harry life at his relitives place yet now under truth potion he his lying saying he did not know for sure. also the not putting him in dementorville is not pointless it would show justice was served for once.

god, they act like they're so much better than everyone else just because they got married and spent a decade in wonderlandlike, we get it, you love each other. now shut up.

This is the most frustating chapter I've ever read, forst of all why didn't hermione use wandless magic at ginny and why the hell is harry going soft at snape?

harry is finally going to do something for sirius lmao that took so long

Is harry retarded? Hermione's cat told him that scabbers a wizard and he knew peter is a rat animagus, he didn't even see peter's name on the map?

wouldn't the basilisk venom in the sword have killed him when Tom was cut on the shoulder