Reviews for H J Potter
Ophis-The-Infinite-Dragon-God chapter 38 . 6/13
Pity, novel was great until this cliche bs just added in for drama. It completely undermined the whole bond by making it so easily broken here, Harry in this ended up even worse than canon one.
Ophis-The-Infinite-Dragon-God chapter 34 . 6/13
Brummagem? Since when was Harry from Birmingham?
Guest chapter 17 . 6/3
Professor Hedwig?
Guest chapter 17 . 6/3
Poor H & Hr. Not a moment to spare. All that studying for 3rd year must be taxing for their NEWT level brains . Oh wait. They've got a "house" that makes 15 minutes into a week. A week of rest, relax and quality time together. YOU REALLY HAVE A PRETTY GOOD STORY but the many many plot holes I try to ignore become distracting.
Guest chapter 11 . 6/3
Forgot Scabbers already or just giving him the fanfic staple time to make a run for it?
Guest chapter 10 . 6/3
It almost seems like H & Hr are blatantly oblivious. Ron was practically their ONLY friend and he is frequently a jerk. Why don't they suspect him as a betrayer? Crookshanks outright told them Scabbers is an Animagus. Why can't they put the gigantic flashing 2 2 together? They are just okay with an unidentified Animagus living in Gryffindor tower? They desperately need to find the RAT with a missing toe. Oh, it's just a coincidence that the rat they've seen a million times has a missing toe. . AND they've not noticed Pettigrew's name when searching the map. And are thy really going to spend the next year or 5 years pretending there's an actual point of sitting in class all day if they can just take their NEWTs now. Hmmm
Yukiisen chapter 20 . 5/11
Dropped
Daniel1973 chapter 4 . 5/3
Love your story.
Guest chapter 55 . 4/12
The plot suffered greatly because character arguments were much more important . Glad I skipped over many chapters . What a waste of time .
Mikeblade chapter 18 . 2/7
how is dumbldore lying under truth potion before dumbldore said hey knew about harry life at his relitives place yet now under truth potion he his lying saying he did not know for sure. also the not putting him in dementorville is not pointless it would show justice was served for once.
thefakeadler chapter 8 . 1/24
god, they act like they're so much better than everyone else just because they got married and spent a decade in wonderlandlike, we get it, you love each other. now shut up.
Makimass chapter 14 . 12/29/2021
This is the most frustating chapter I've ever read, forst of all why didn't hermione use wandless magic at ginny and why the hell is harry going soft at snape?
Makimass chapter 13 . 12/29/2021
harry is finally going to do something for sirius lmao that took so long
Makimass chapter 10 . 12/29/2021
Is harry retarded? Hermione's cat told him that scabbers a wizard and he knew peter is a rat animagus, he didn't even see peter's name on the map?
fuunu chapter 54 . 12/23/2021
wouldn't the basilisk venom in the sword have killed him when Tom was cut on the shoulder
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