Reviews for Just Like a Game of Tag
mira-tan chapter 4 . 4/15/2012
This is good and i'm from the Philippines o.o hahahahahhahaha awesome _ please update soon I love your fic
ZonaRose chapter 4 . 12/25/2010
I liked it I look foreword to the next chapters.
xNagisaChan chapter 4 . 7/4/2009
OMG.. this is such an awesome story xD I totally rofled at the last part.. great mixture of humor with a bit of the seriousness of the mission.. xD just a bit though..

xD I hate that guy from the airplane.. stupid homophobe.. great choise to punnish him for that xD

I'll be deffinately waiting for the Hayate/Everyone's Breasts part.. SubaTea as well

I hope you'll update this fic soon ;P it's totally awesome!

(now I'm sure, I'm going to read stories from Team GEMINI! XD)

Gokigenyou, Nagisa
Carl-Azure Moon chapter 4 . 6/22/2009
Nyahaha~Now I see why there's 'Aggressive mode' for Nanoha XDD

And Fate is becoming a prevert bit by bit...(It's all Nanoha's fault!)

Keep the good work going!
Honulicious chapter 4 . 6/9/2009
i love it when fate is soo protective! awesome!

what's a hickey? haa vivio is soo cute!
DONE chapter 4 . 6/9/2009
come on! update !
KillerQueen118 chapter 4 . 6/8/2009
Good job! Like the ending and Keep up the good work!
KillerQueen118 chapter 3 . 6/8/2009
Good work on this chapter and keep up the good work.
DefendMyGirlsHonor chapter 4 . 6/8/2009
Awesome job! Thanks for updating _
musikazen chapter 4 . 6/8/2009
Go Fate! Nice fluff and comedic scenes
I'minspace chapter 4 . 6/8/2009
oh boy Fate switched roles with Nanoha

vivio is still too innocent for her own good

Signum laughing like Nanoha... i can't see that happening but its funny
Honulicious chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
haa! your plot is very interesting! like the rescue mission for the Key.

i am loving your deleted scenes! ha and nanoha is so perverted/horny! poor fate
DefendMyGirlsHonor chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
Heh, fate gets embarassed so easily...Awesome job on the chapter.
musikazen chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
So many nice moments. "wandering hands," cute family interactions, a perverted guy (by the way I like how Fate handled that especially "would you go gay for us?" I thought that was hilarious, the deleted scene was nice too like an in your face type thing from Nanoha.

Also, the new character Key, I like her bubbly personality despite her personal issues.

*turns head* "what do you think Mr. Critic?"

Critic thinks "hm..." raises two thumbs up and a bright smile. "wouwho! Keep on going!"

There you have it. The Critic says its a go. So keep on going :)
I'minspace chapter 3 . 6/3/2009
first off when i read the pairing Hayate/Everyones's breasts i was thinking this will add more to the humor but then you said you were kidding i was like aww..

once again Nanoha can't keep her hands to her self even doing that in front of Chrono.. girl has no self restraint

why is it that old men are the bigger perverts? Fate should have hurt him.

the deleted scene was sure interesting and made Nanoha a bigger perv. making Fate's job easier yeah right..
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