Reviews for Broken
Enthralled chapter 4 . 6/16/2009
I just love Alice and Jasper...
VoldieBeth chapter 4 . 6/16/2009
Of course I love any chapter that has tons of Jasper and Alice in it, but did you have to end it with that line: 'She sighed softly then nodded, positive she could make it through almost anything with Jasper to help her.' and make me think of A Long Time Waiting again? I loved that fic and I'm loving this one! You write the perfect Jasper and Alice and I can't wait to read more.

Now, if Carlisle and Esme were to choice I think Esme would be on Rosalie's side because they have the same backround pretty much. And I think Carlisle would favor Emmett a bit more because he doesn't want to see his family torn apart.

I can't wait for more!
xxtwilight chapter 3 . 6/15/2009
Interesting. Keep it up!
theshadowofyoursmile chapter 3 . 6/14/2009
jeje even this one is dramatic hoom I laughed out loud when I read about the tricks Emet had been playing in Rose jajajajaj even I don't really understand them really it's difficult I dunno what came together to make those two liking each other things different to sex or cars... or wii tennis jajaja

thanks ofr the fic 8D
persistingstars chapter 3 . 6/13/2009
This is great so far...I'm glad it isn't about Alice and Jasper, to be honest, I don't think I could've taken another fic about them falling apart! I like the idea that there would be tension building up as Nessie grew up because Rose was so attached to her, and that Emmett would begin to get resentful...I just hope it doesn't end as sadly as A Long Time Waiting...even though that wouldn't make me stop reading for a minute, love your fics :)
littleyellowporsche chapter 3 . 6/9/2009
Im going to keep reading this...

But, Im still not sure if I like it or not. Dont kick Emmett out of the house!

Update soon,

Jack
kt.potter93 chapter 3 . 6/9/2009
naw, poor them :P

nice chapter :)
xAutumnTwilightx chapter 1 . 6/9/2009
Update soon! Em is acting shockingly cavalier about all of this and Rose is acting uninterested and carefree (as her demeanor and facade always is), yet I think deep down they're scared and don't really want to divorce. I'm rambling, sorry. Anyway, great addition to the story and keep up the amazing work! Oh! I have a question, do the couples titled for each chapter represent the Cullen couples? Bella and EdwardHeathcliff and Kathy?, Emmett and RosalieGilbert and Anne, and Carlisle and EsmeLancelot and Guniviere? I know they're famous couples in literature...anything more to it? Ok, still rambling! SORRY! Update soon! Keep up the perfection!
Scarlet chapter 3 . 6/9/2009
Its a really good story and i love your style, but i prefer stories where rose and em are together! ;-)
Sillybookwarm chapter 3 . 6/9/2009
Nice chapter. Update soon!
VoldieBeth chapter 3 . 6/9/2009
Ah another conflict that SMeyer refused to believe would come up. I knew Rosalie and Emmett's relationship was physical but Emmett could never give her the one thing she wanted, a baby. I thought it was totally out of character for Rosalie to help Bella so much and bet she had thoughts of Bella dying and her raising Reneesme. This seems like such a real fight for Emmett and Rosalie to have, and I can't wait for more!
Enthralled chapter 3 . 6/9/2009
Lovely writing...my favorite imagery part?

Carlisle taking the stairs seven at the time...
sbeller chapter 2 . 6/5/2009
wow, this is a new story plot line. great start.
SamanthaAnn chapter 2 . 6/4/2009
Wow, Emmett and Rosalie. I wasn't expecting that. I'm interested to see where you go. I'm enjoying the chapter titles. I can't wait to see who you pick next. I'm glad you decided to write/post another story. Thanks
xxtwilight chapter 2 . 6/3/2009
Cliffie! I can't wait
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