|Reviews for Broken|
| EJ10 chapter 16 . 9/19/2009
Jasper STOP! I need the next chapter! Please update soon!
I cried at Carlisle's prayer, it was so sad. Poor Emmett, but once again I am so glad that he has Rosalie. I also have a newfound respect for Marcus, after the last chapter.
I LOVE your work. You are my favourite writter of all time (professional or otherwise), you should write a novel!
| TillITryIllNeverKnow chapter 16 . 9/18/2009
That is such a cruel place to drop us! Seriously though, I was blown away by your solution: they become human and then start the process all over again. Genius! Such genius!
| gilliam-melissa chapter 16 . 9/18/2009
WOW! That was a wonderful chapter...to find the antidote and to have them be cured of what they are...brilliant and then have to be turned again, amazing, I loved it. Now if Jasper can just stop before he kills Alice...I now he will find the strength, he has to...
Can't wait for another update!
Your fanfic fan, MG
| Reina Valeria Nox chapter 16 . 9/18/2009
| Lilacs46 chapter 16 . 9/18/2009
Oh please, I beg you. Don't allow Jasper to kill Alice. My heart couldn't bear it if you did.
| jess.not.ie chapter 16 . 9/18/2009
I read all previous 15 chapters over 2 days and then when I finished you updated. I gotta say I really love this story I love how you have written it in third person yet concentrating on the different couples.
This chapter has left me with lots of questions and theory's to think about. I can't wait for the next update.
| Tashiipear chapter 16 . 9/18/2009
Bad Jasper, bad! Down boy. LULz.
Good story, but Rosalie and Emmett are a bit out of character. I doubt Jasper would try to suck Alice, but it doesn't seem amazingly different from who he is.
I look forward to more!
| Sillybookwarm chapter 16 . 9/18/2009
Aw... you just had to end it right there... Update soon!
| Cymbeliness chapter 16 . 9/18/2009
Wow I did not see that coming! Fabulous chapter can't wait to read more!
| Enthralled chapter 16 . 9/18/2009
Geezums...with an ending like that, you need to update a whole heck of a lot quicker!
| VoldieBeth chapter 16 . 9/18/2009
James did say Alice was the best smelling human he ever came across. I hope Jasper stops, nothing would destroy him more knowing that he killed Alice. I can't wait for more!
| 911turbowriter chapter 16 . 9/18/2009
Oh mY Jasper! you cant leave us hanging like that! (though I am guilty of the same thing in my stories) haha UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE.
| Letholog1ca chapter 16 . 9/17/2009
So Alice would have been Jasper's singer if she were human. I think Jasper would have some new respect for Edward now, Jasper couldn't resist his temptation though. I loved it. I absolutely love it, there is something so beautiful and sweet about it.
Carlisle needs to yank him off though, he better not kill Alice or else!
| steprightup chapter 15 . 9/17/2009
what happens to JASPER?
please update this! it is great :D
| sogently chapter 15 . 9/15/2009
fuck, I want to cry. even if they might have found the cure, I want to cry for Jasper and his sacrifice. your writing is excellent, thank you for sharing this unique story.