|Reviews for Broken|
| Lilacs46 chapter 15 . 9/11/2009
Finally, Rose came to her senses. I have a feeling Jasper will return shortly after Alice and Esme are cured. I hope at least as I am sure it was Marias ashes on the floor.
| Lethologica86 chapter 14 . 9/10/2009
*dies* Dammit Mandi why do I always get the horrible cliffies. I have NO idea how things are gonna work out and if they ever will.
I am hurting for Jasper right now *cries* why do you always give him to Maria! You're evil! *throws pillow*
| gilliam-melissa chapter 14 . 9/6/2009
It’s only a hundred years...OMG! *sobbing* Jasper what have you done? *crying* No...
What a GREAT chapter! Please update soon.
Your fanfic fan, MG
| xxandlovesaidno chapter 14 . 9/5/2009
sorry i havent been reviewing your story it turns out that i have been typying my password wrong for months.. im really interested in reading how this story unfolds.
| kt.potter93 chapter 14 . 9/5/2009
omg jasper! he shouldnt...omg...
| christiespace chapter 14 . 9/5/2009
your story is named appropriately for sure. My heart is broken after reading this chapter. :( Poor Jasper and how is Alice going to deal with his loss? Join them too? ARGH!
Looking forward to your update.
| spellboundagain chapter 14 . 9/5/2009
Why Jasper? Why?
Now the Cullens are going to have to break him out when Alice and Esme get well, right?
| Kimbi94 chapter 14 . 9/5/2009
Woderful chapter, but OMG what has Jasper done ? -he is such an overprotective stupid git sometimes ...
anyway will be looking forward to read what happens next (especially between Em and Rose )
love your story so plz update quickly ...
luv Kim xoxo
| Lilacs46 chapter 14 . 9/5/2009
I really love Emmett, he may be a big oaf, but he is so sweet and he loves his wife.
| Cullenista chapter 14 . 9/5/2009
Well I figured Jasper would get Maria to help them, but that's like making a deal with the devil. I wonder what she demanded for payment... whatever it is, I'm sure it's horrible.
OMG, no. ONLY! Just no.
Of course Marcus would feel sorry for Jasper. My only consolation is that when Alice is well, she will go after Maria. I can't wait to read that. Keep it up, I love your storytelling.
| Enthralled chapter 14 . 9/5/2009
What a bitch!
| EJ10 chapter 14 . 9/5/2009
Aw! It was so sad! Whenever Emmett was talking to Esme and when Jasper was stuck with the Volturi, I nearly cried!
Poor Jasper. Damn it, poor everyone! But at least Alice and Esme will wake up now, right? And we all know that without Alice, Jasper could VERY easily turn into Marcus. But I like Marcus, he always feels sorry for people when obody else does.
Another AMAZING chapter, well done!
| Sillybookwarm chapter 14 . 9/5/2009
No! Update soon!
| TashiiPear chapter 13 . 9/5/2009
This story is epic. Please finish it. 3
I really like how you had Rosalie and Emmett split and then find that they love each other enough to remember their first anniversary. I also like the fact that EMMETT was the one that remembered and not Rosalie.
And the whole thing happening to Alice and Esme? Brilliant! Not, like, for them, but the idea is wonderful.
| furious kitten chapter 9 . 9/3/2009
Haha I figured it out halfway through the chapter- AMC based in Southern Europe...