Reviews for I dare you
What a B1tch chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Your grammar is really quite atrocious. I know you said in your Author's Note that it's been edited, but it doesn't appear to be so. The sentence structure is confusing, the plot doesn't occur until two-thirds of the way through the chapter.

This is not good. It's so boring that it's almost irredeemable. You need a beta reader to make this story any interesting. I suggest you take the entire story down and edit it.

Good luck with rewrites!

-Lover of Gone
HeavenlyAngel34 chapter 12 . 7/17/2010
Loved this story!
HeavenlyAngel34 chapter 11 . 7/17/2010
Loved it! The trick that Alice,Bella,and Rosalie played on Edward,Emmett,and Jasper was funny!
HeavenlyAngel34 chapter 10 . 7/17/2010
I love reading this story bc its really well written!
HeavenlyAngel34 chapter 9 . 7/17/2010
Loved it!
HeavenlyAngel34 chapter 8 . 7/17/2010
Loved it!
HeavenlyAngel34 chapter 7 . 7/17/2010
Loved it!
HeavenlyAngel34 chapter 6 . 7/17/2010
Loved it!
HeavenlyAngel34 chapter 5 . 7/17/2010
Loved it!
HeavenlyAngel34 chapter 4 . 7/17/2010
Loved it!
HeavenlyAngel34 chapter 3 . 7/17/2010
Loved it! It was a funny chapter!
HeavenlyAngel34 chapter 2 . 7/17/2010
Loved it!
HeavenlyAngel34 chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
Loved it!
bella23 chapter 9 . 5/24/2010
i think it is coming along great like most of your stores have hope every thing is good
Butterflies-LastForever chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
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