|Reviews for Always With You|
| PlatinumRoseLady chapter 2 . 6/3/2009
So very descriptive!
| ziggy.uk chapter 2 . 6/3/2009
Still none the wiser which brother is having the nightmare, it might not be the obvious one! Great descriptions again.
| Realhuntress chapter 2 . 6/3/2009
Oh, wow. Waking up with no memory but that nightmare. Yikes! At least he's not alone. Will be watching for the next chapter on the edge of my seat!
| Nana56 chapter 2 . 6/3/2009
I really liked this chapter and I know you're experimenting with style, but it's too short! Wah! *Whines* I need more.
The content is completely awesome, too.
"Then a hand on his arm, warm comfort. “Hey. Hey, man. Easy, bro. You’re okay. Just breathe through it. You’re okay, I gotcha.” Murmured reassurances from a voice that felt familiar…felt like home.
Pain-tightened muscles instinctively loosened…and he slid once more into darkness."
| JenF chapter 2 . 6/3/2009
Gah! More questions than answers again!
I love the title to this chapter btw :)
| OcherMe chapter 2 . 6/2/2009
hm...I'm intrigued. But which of the brothers has lost their memory? Can't wait to read more!
| pandora jazz chapter 2 . 6/2/2009
More clues...dragons?, a brother is there, but which one?
I know I'm being selfish, but these chapters are to short.
You do a wonderful job with your descriptions.
Thanks for the update.
| Ani-maniac494 chapter 2 . 6/2/2009
"His chest hurt with every inhale; burned each exhale like fire from his lungs. Dragons breathed fire. Had he been dreaming of dragons?"
This is a wonderful transition. :) It's such a great description as well!
"Pain-tightened muscles instinctively loosened…and he slid once more into darkness."
I love that he instinctively knows his brother, even without his memory. It's so easy to imagine Sam and Dean's connection being that strong.
Incredible, incredible work as always! :)
| deangirl1 chapter 2 . 6/2/2009
Ah! More clues... me thinks I see some analogies appearing here...or metaphors if you prefer the more limiting trope...
| sammygirl1963 chapter 2 . 6/2/2009
Okay Beth, now you have me wondering just which brother was hurt and which one is doing the comforting...come on girl...give us a hint!
| sidjack chapter 2 . 6/2/2009
This is so emotional. I like the way a touch grounds him, he can get back to himself and safety through it. Pain and disoriented, but he knows home.
| Kelcor chapter 2 . 6/2/2009
Really loving this! Can't wait for more! :o)
PS I hope you're still enjoying "Can't Get Home". :o)
| InSecret chapter 2 . 6/2/2009
*clamours for more*
| PlatinumRoseLady chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Wow, that was so descriptive and just flat-out COOL!
| Realhuntress chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
Ok - definitely have my attention! Can't wait for more!