Reviews for The Date
Silverbengal chapter 1 . 4/14/2015
Oh my god that was so funny! I was expecting some sort of romantic scene, and then that!
hiveluver chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
lol very funny
NeverTheMindless chapter 1 . 1/26/2014
I died from laughter! This is frickin hilarious!
StarkidHufflepuff chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
OK, this is officially the crack-y-est story I've ever read. I love it.

43dfglkhsdfn gbjklsdadfgf chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
rofl :) poor, misguided, half-robot otto...
Forever Day chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
Okay my honest opinion of your writing. . .not so great. But the storyline. . .incredibly good. You probably should have done parody in the description, but I was killing myself at the 'Otto: *frightened* How did you sneak this in here? No – more importantly, WHY DO YOU HAVE THIS?'

Overall very funny, but everyone was totally OOC.
aliasali chapter 1 . 2/18/2010
You scarred me for life with that one! Oh Franz!
roughdiamond5 chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
Well...I will confess that they were rather out of character for me. Oh, but what a twist! I should like to see ideas like this in other fandoms, for the great job you did. :)
soserene93 chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
LOVE it !
Aquamarinelightnight chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
Enna Moon chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
That was, um, really weird, but I'm glad someone's written a H.I.V.E. fic.
Swamp Fairy chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
ha. ha. HA! love this too much. like it wng wing and shelby die X_x. from laughing. too funny!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/16/2009
...ok then?
edenforest1 chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
yay! congrats! finally a hive fanfic~! i was looking for one when i first came upon this site, but sadly couldnt find any...2 bad
relentlessly chapter 1 . 6/5/2009
Eh ... it's funny ... sort of. and not really well written with the *s and everything. But, I do appreciate HIVE fiction as this is the first one I've seen
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