Reviews for Unwanted
PainGwen chapter 2 . 1/29/2012
You could easily make a sequeal just change it up a bit, since at the end of the story Sephiroth tells him they will be seeing him agian, just continue the story where Cloud runs away or something of the sort. It would change it up and probaly confuse many of your readers, in a good way.
jigoku-kage chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
so sick... i loved it!
Agatsuma Ritsuka chapter 2 . 7/17/2009
Is that so horrible? J/K Vera vera nice XD
Beautiful Cerberus chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
Oh my god...Poor Cloud! I felt sorry for him the entire time! How diabolical...
jigoku-kage chapter 2 . 6/5/2009
I love your story

it gave me such a rush...im alive
Mako-Chibi chapter 2 . 6/4/2009
i kinda felt sorry for Cloud in this story! but i really luv what you did in it i dont think it needs a sequal! think you did just fine on it by itself! well, good job!

~ mako
Chanson des Ombres chapter 2 . 5/31/2009
Oh, wow, hot or what? XD

Absolutely gorgeous! I loved it :D