Reviews for Discoveries
Quicksilvermad chapter 3 . 5/30/2009
Jesus wept...

*fans herself some more*

Rounds two through four, Spock, Commander (oh boy!)
Supermegafoxyawesomehot7 chapter 3 . 5/30/2009
Score!
Supermegafoxyawesomehot7 chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
:-)
mhgood chapter 3 . 5/30/2009
Whew! [fanning myself]

"His breathing was ragged and she could feel the thrumming of his heart against her side – right above her hip."

Good-you got Vulcan anatomy right.

"What did you expect to happen when green blood races to fill one area of a pale body, Nyota?

I guess I should have expected a green penis, Brain."

What, no sparkle-peen? Oh, wait. Wrong fandom. Hah! I LOVE this! It's such a *duh* moment.

I love this-I'm adding it to my C2, "Oh, for the love of Spock," and adding it to my alerts, too.
mhgood chapter 2 . 5/30/2009
Wow! You write Spock very well-his mantra of "control" is very believable-that last one is pretty humourous, too!
mhgood chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
“'That is my bed,' he said.

That is probably the first inane thing he has ever said in his entire life. Kudos, Nyota!"

Hah! Love it! I really like Nyota's inner monologue through this chapter. Very well-written and enjoyable.
ahealthyaddiction chapter 3 . 5/30/2009
Wow! This was great. Super hot. Love Uhura's confidence.
MamaJMarie chapter 3 . 5/30/2009
Very, very nice. Keep up the great work.

J.
DiscoUnicorn chapter 3 . 5/30/2009
The blow job that destroyed Spock's resolve. LMAO. I loved this. Yes, I like dirty chapters, but this was a simple blowjob that held so much...And I like how you explain why his penis is green. I'm sorry. This is awkward! But this chapter was insanely delicious!
LaFemmeQuiRit chapter 3 . 5/30/2009
Great story. Quite funny! I look forward to reading more.
SEEKER-2000 chapter 3 . 5/30/2009
Penis, Nyota-focus!

BEST LINE EVER
Elizawriter chapter 2 . 5/30/2009
how can you end it there? Next chapter... ah, you're great. You do the internal monologue really well although I'm sure I've said that already.

Eliza x
Quicksilvermad chapter 2 . 5/30/2009
*fans herself*

Is it hot in here? Whoo...

Forget control. Lose it. Go nuts.

*thumbs up* I'm so liking this fic.
Beatlemaniac1 chapter 2 . 5/29/2009
I must admit, I just love their inner monologues. XD Great story so far; please continue! _
A.Miles chapter 2 . 5/29/2009
I really love this story.
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