Reviews for Discoveries |
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Quicksilvermad chapter 3 . 5/30/2009 Jesus wept... *fans herself some more* Rounds two through four, Spock, Commander (oh boy!) |
Supermegafoxyawesomehot7 chapter 3 . 5/30/2009 Score! |
Supermegafoxyawesomehot7 chapter 1 . 5/30/2009 :-) |
mhgood chapter 3 . 5/30/2009 Whew! [fanning myself] "His breathing was ragged and she could feel the thrumming of his heart against her side – right above her hip." Good-you got Vulcan anatomy right. "What did you expect to happen when green blood races to fill one area of a pale body, Nyota? I guess I should have expected a green penis, Brain." What, no sparkle-peen? Oh, wait. Wrong fandom. Hah! I LOVE this! It's such a *duh* moment. I love this-I'm adding it to my C2, "Oh, for the love of Spock," and adding it to my alerts, too. |
mhgood chapter 2 . 5/30/2009 Wow! You write Spock very well-his mantra of "control" is very believable-that last one is pretty humourous, too! |
mhgood chapter 1 . 5/30/2009 “'That is my bed,' he said. That is probably the first inane thing he has ever said in his entire life. Kudos, Nyota!" Hah! Love it! I really like Nyota's inner monologue through this chapter. Very well-written and enjoyable. |
ahealthyaddiction chapter 3 . 5/30/2009 Wow! This was great. Super hot. Love Uhura's confidence. |
MamaJMarie chapter 3 . 5/30/2009 Very, very nice. Keep up the great work. J. |
DiscoUnicorn chapter 3 . 5/30/2009 The blow job that destroyed Spock's resolve. LMAO. I loved this. Yes, I like dirty chapters, but this was a simple blowjob that held so much...And I like how you explain why his penis is green. I'm sorry. This is awkward! But this chapter was insanely delicious! |
LaFemmeQuiRit chapter 3 . 5/30/2009 Great story. Quite funny! I look forward to reading more. |
SEEKER-2000 chapter 3 . 5/30/2009 Penis, Nyota-focus! BEST LINE EVER |
Elizawriter chapter 2 . 5/30/2009 how can you end it there? Next chapter... ah, you're great. You do the internal monologue really well although I'm sure I've said that already. Eliza x |
Quicksilvermad chapter 2 . 5/30/2009 *fans herself* Is it hot in here? Whoo... Forget control. Lose it. Go nuts. *thumbs up* I'm so liking this fic. |
Beatlemaniac1 chapter 2 . 5/29/2009 I must admit, I just love their inner monologues. XD Great story so far; please continue! _ |
A.Miles chapter 2 . 5/29/2009 I really love this story. |