i liked the juxaposition of the chapters. he's so rigid but passionate at the same time :P

can't wait for more!

Hehe. I like how the word control is broken at the end. Very poetic. Great chapter! :D

Really good. I am loving Spock's internal monologue.

loved it loved it loved have spock right on the money. i can really imagine thats how he would react. i dont think that uhura would just jump into bed with some random guy though she seems too logical to get a substiute for spock. please write more im goint to subscribe to your story because you have me hooke just with spock and uhura converstations. loved it ok im not going to say it again.: )

Nice, real nice. More please!

Sexy without being graphic and not a cliche in sight -

no mean feat! I always love stories where you get to see inside chracter's head and when one of them is Spock - oh yeah! Please don't keep us hanging - everyone will be waiting for an update asap!

there is never enough of these, especially when written this well

Hmm...Very nice.

J.

a vulcan would describe this as accurate.

a human would describe this as BOOYAH!

wow she is pushy!

“I’m a woman,” she said, shocking herself.

“Yes.”

“You are a man.”

lmao!

a few gramitical errors but nothing serious

a good piece of writing, esspically the descriptive words.

lol this is too funny XD

just way too funny! nice writing!

LOL. Great job. Keep it up. :D

Don't be so modest; this was awesome! And yes, I've read all the first time ones. I love how it wasn't overly... sexual, but still had me squirming in my seat. Love love LOVED the interactions. This was great! I hope you continue!

-zeurin

I'm pretty entertained.