Reviews for Discoveries
DiscoUnicorn chapter 5 . 6/1/2009
You are very right. Writing smut is very very very very enjoyable and easy. :D So is reading it! Love the chapter. Keep up the good work. ;)
Trinilynn chapter 5 . 6/1/2009
sigh...how sweet
elaine451 chapter 5 . 6/1/2009
I absolutely LOVE this! Her insecurities are so true, what woman hasn't felt this at one time or another? All of it is just too perfect! Thank you! Hope there's more?
Elizawriter chapter 5 . 6/1/2009
Woah. You are so good at writing this. Internal monologue - spot on. External monologue - just as good. I'm favouriting you now. mwah x
mhgood chapter 5 . 6/1/2009
Love how she talks to her bainr! Hah! This is great-you nail the feeling of terror that she might get kicked out, and then the feeling of relief. So nice!
SEEKER-2000 chapter 5 . 6/1/2009
Brain did good. :) lol
Quicksilvermad chapter 5 . 6/1/2009
AW!

If you could see the happy smile on my face right now... little emoticons don't do this grin justice. How very sweet of Spock—exactly how I think he'd act post-coitus (if you will).
realistjoker chapter 5 . 6/1/2009
Hot, love this story
MamaJMarie chapter 5 . 6/1/2009
Another very good chapter. good job

J.
MamaJMarie chapter 4 . 6/1/2009
Very yummy. I like that he "studied" several different types of erotica. Keep up the excellent work.\

J.
Trinilynn chapter 4 . 6/1/2009
so intense...what a amazing story to wake up to...love the chap update soon
vixenXfreezepop chapter 4 . 6/1/2009
nice story :)

at first i was like eww a green penis.

but then you reminded me that his blood was green

so that made it all better haha i'm so dumb.

i really really enjoy this story a lot a lot a lot

the only thing i really didn't like is how Uhura is kinda a slut / with the experienced/talented mouth and tongue and hips and whatever. that's the only part that kinda put me off.

but not enough to stop me from reading lol

but other than that you are a great writer and keep up the good work :D
Fairy of Fire and Fury chapter 4 . 5/31/2009
haha absolutly wonderful please continue!
elaine451 chapter 4 . 5/31/2009
Another WOW! You have such a gift for dialog and the interaction between Spock and Nyota is so real. Please update soon 8)
elaine451 chapter 3 . 5/31/2009
Totally hot, but the way you've suffused it all with the humor of Nyota's thoughts is pure genius! Can't wait to read what Spock is going to do to her!
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