Reviews for Discoveries |
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DiscoUnicorn chapter 5 . 6/1/2009 You are very right. Writing smut is very very very very enjoyable and easy. :D So is reading it! Love the chapter. Keep up the good work. ;) |
Trinilynn chapter 5 . 6/1/2009 sigh...how sweet |
elaine451 chapter 5 . 6/1/2009 I absolutely LOVE this! Her insecurities are so true, what woman hasn't felt this at one time or another? All of it is just too perfect! Thank you! Hope there's more? |
Elizawriter chapter 5 . 6/1/2009 Woah. You are so good at writing this. Internal monologue - spot on. External monologue - just as good. I'm favouriting you now. mwah x |
mhgood chapter 5 . 6/1/2009 Love how she talks to her bainr! Hah! This is great-you nail the feeling of terror that she might get kicked out, and then the feeling of relief. So nice! |
SEEKER-2000 chapter 5 . 6/1/2009 Brain did good. :) lol |
Quicksilvermad chapter 5 . 6/1/2009 AW! If you could see the happy smile on my face right now... little emoticons don't do this grin justice. How very sweet of Spockâexactly how I think he'd act post-coitus (if you will). |
realistjoker chapter 5 . 6/1/2009 Hot, love this story |
MamaJMarie chapter 5 . 6/1/2009 Another very good chapter. good job J. |
MamaJMarie chapter 4 . 6/1/2009 Very yummy. I like that he "studied" several different types of erotica. Keep up the excellent work.\ J. |
Trinilynn chapter 4 . 6/1/2009 so intense...what a amazing story to wake up to...love the chap update soon |
vixenXfreezepop chapter 4 . 6/1/2009 nice story :) at first i was like eww a green penis. but then you reminded me that his blood was green so that made it all better haha i'm so dumb. i really really enjoy this story a lot a lot a lot the only thing i really didn't like is how Uhura is kinda a slut / with the experienced/talented mouth and tongue and hips and whatever. that's the only part that kinda put me off. but not enough to stop me from reading lol but other than that you are a great writer and keep up the good work :D |
Fairy of Fire and Fury chapter 4 . 5/31/2009 haha absolutly wonderful please continue! |
elaine451 chapter 4 . 5/31/2009 Another WOW! You have such a gift for dialog and the interaction between Spock and Nyota is so real. Please update soon 8) |
elaine451 chapter 3 . 5/31/2009 Totally hot, but the way you've suffused it all with the humor of Nyota's thoughts is pure genius! Can't wait to read what Spock is going to do to her! |