Reviews for Discoveries |
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elaine451 chapter 2 . 5/31/2009 Wow! I love the power that is Nyota! She's fabulous. And Spock is just too cute, his losing battle for control is just hilarious! |
elaine451 chapter 1 . 5/31/2009 Okay, this was such a cute chapter! LOVE Nyota's internal dialog, so funny. This is a great begining! Can't wait to read more! |
Quicksilvermad chapter 4 . 5/31/2009 You TEASE! *clears throat* I mean, thank you for continuing this so promptly. I am curious to see just how long the following chapter will be. And hoping that its length is appropriate—that is, quite longer than this. (ha ha! "Length." Gutterbrain here...) |
Bandbabe chapter 4 . 5/31/2009 Green! I never considered that but it's makes a lot of sense! This story is hot! |
Aspiration Abounds chapter 1 . 5/31/2009 Holy freaking Toledo! This story is awesome... I found myself checking for an update after reading chapter three - at seven a.m. this morning, before I even brushed my teeth! I love Spock (I'm a fan of the old series) and loved that they made his character a little more "touchable" for the newest movie; your description of his and Nyota's first time together really came together seamlessly, with perfect character for each of them. I loved it. Are you planning on continuing it? A reciprocation from our pointy-eared lovebird might be nice (hint hint haha). Keep up the good work. I really enjoy this story. -Aspiration Abounds |
Nanyin chapter 4 . 5/31/2009 ready, steady- GO! |
mykardia chapter 4 . 5/31/2009 lol...nice ;) |
Mrs.Moony86 chapter 4 . 5/31/2009 Oh my god! When you said that the "M" rating was warranted you weren’t even remotely kidding. This story is so incredibly sexy! I love the internal conversations, the descriptiveness and the action. You have done a really fantastic job on this story. I am waiting on pins and needles for your next chapter. I hope to see it soon. Keep up the amazing work. |
Mrs.Moony86 chapter 1 . 5/31/2009 If I am starting a multichapter story I usually don't review each chapter I just do a summary at the end of the last chapter of the previous ones. That long rambling sentence said, I just want to say that I love the conversations Uhura is having with herself, “Good points, Nyota. Thanks, Brain!” "Thank you Brain, thank you Brain, thank you Brain" Those cracked me up. I love this bold pushy Uhura. I am off to read the next 3 chapters. Can't wait. |
ScarletK chapter 4 . 5/31/2009 Goodness! Spock is surely having the time of his life. Fascinating! |
Toni Westbrooks chapter 4 . 5/31/2009 sexy as hell. my toes are still curled! |
DiscoUnicorn chapter 4 . 5/31/2009 Whoa...*fans* I think you're going to start an uproar with these chapters! XD Not that I'm complaining. Great job. |
Crimson-lips46 chapter 3 . 5/31/2009 Ah, YES! More smex! XD I love it! ;P Update when you can! |
karmapolice28 chapter 3 . 5/31/2009 wow i like this!high-five to you dude.i especially like the whole "his-body-will-turn-green-under-the-throws-of-passion" thing because it makes perfect sense and makes the whole story a whole lot more realistic good job kid ;) |
AsamiBlackfyre chapter 3 . 5/30/2009 hahahahaha that was hot but the best part was the last line. Uhura won the first round eh? The Commander doesnt take losing too well :P |