|Reviews for Keeper of the Vampire King's Heart|
| Mutilated Pancake chapter 11 . 5/9
A wonderful chapter darling! I loved the talk between Cas and Sam!
As for ideas, how about a really sick Sam and over protective Dean?
Can't wait to see more sweetie!
| kirallie chapter 11 . 4/30
Great chapter! Glad to see this updated
| BruisedBloodyBroken chapter 10 . 4/22
Yeah well... I'd love to read Sam fleeing from one of the coven. They aren't all nice. Do... I figured, Sam's fleeing from the vamp while Dean's out doing something like doing coven stuff and feels like something is wrong.
Sam gets hurt by the vamp. Real bad.
Or gets sick, because it's cold outside and he doesn't wear a lot. Real badly sick
Of course, Desn kills the vamp there, OR later on.
He takes care of a feverish Sam.
Another idea would be: Sam's got a disease. First he's dizzy and nauseous a lot of times but doesn't tell dean
He collapses during one of the history lessons, that's how they find out.
In the end, dean has to turn sam earlier than he thought. ö.
| nazurath92 chapter 11 . 4/15
This is a good story :) keep up the good work and for ideas you can do a lot like you can bring Meg and her family can be after the vampires for some reason but what ever you do I'm looking forward to it :)
| coldkagome chapter 11 . 4/9
Awesome cas. and Sammy. Talk
| CalamityJim chapter 10 . 4/4
OMG! Update! LUV
| samisnotevil chapter 11 . 4/3
Really happy to see you are continuing this fic. I love the story line. I think Sam and Dean's relationship should develop more and Sam should learn more about life as a vampire before revenge comes up. living well is the best revenge.
| babyreaper chapter 11 . 4/3
Great seeing a new chapter, is Sam going to wait until he's a vampire before going to visit the folks? Or go as he is but take Dean along with him? Enjoyed it, thx
| NetMyne01 chapter 11 . 4/3
WOW! So happy to see you're back! Great update, can't wait for the next chapter. :-)
| tellytha chapter 11 . 4/3
So glad to see you back. I fell in love with story a few years ago and have been hoping for more updates. I think it might be interesting for Sam to run into at least one of his family members before he's ready to get revenge. I think it could be a character building moment. Maybe Lucas has a gang of friends that attack Sam and his new family saves him. Oh this is a little off topic but I'm partial to sick fics and the idea of dean pampering Sammy who's sick just sounds so cute. Sorry for the ramble but you asked for suggestions. Snyway I love your stories and I'm glad to hear from you. I hope real life cad down for you.
| Little13Silence chapter 11 . 4/3
Great chapter; just a suggestion, but you could have Sam being kidnapped, either by a vampire who wants to destroy the clan and uses Sam as bait as a way to catch/kill other vamps (maybe has an inside man?) because he/she knows who important Sam is to the clan; or maybe by his old family who somehow managed to find out that he now lives with a wealthy family, who they believe will pay a lot of money to get Sam back (also it would then give Dean more of an excuse [what happened to Sam already by them was more than enough of an excuse to rip out their internal organs, and more) of torture & kill Sam's old family, and to not feel bad about it at all. Sorry, haven't had any coffee yet today, so have gone a bit jittery, feel free to ignore all of that if you want :)
| princess moon shadow chapter 11 . 4/2
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 11 . 4/2
I really like it! **
| SamDeanLover28 chapter 11 . 4/2
great. looking forward to more
| Ghostwriter chapter 11 . 4/2
Awesome work. Love it. Catch ya on the flip side.