|Reviews for Keeper of the Vampire King's Heart|
| freakygirl26 chapter 3 . 9/15
Please tell me you are continuing this story! I've read it about 3 times and it is truly awesome!
| Scififan33 chapter 12 . 8/10
Glad Sam got him to admit the problem
| brightsidetolife chapter 12 . 7/29
Thanks for the update! I love intimate moments between Dean and Sam
| LeeMarieJack chapter 12 . 7/29
Finally they are beginning to take full possession of each other. It should only grow deeper until they are completely bonded in a marriage of souls and bodies. After Sam turns he should go looking for his pitiful brother. I feel it would be appropriate for a distant branch of the vampire family (I refuse to call it a coven, that's for witches) should take Sam's brother in, turn him and teach him to love a new family. He will have to acknowledge Sam and Dean as co-rulers of the family. He will have to submit to his own despised brother. That should finally teach him the true value of family. In the mean time Sam's own mother and father will suffer the loss of both sons. I suggest that the father be taken as food by a cold hearted vampire and eventually killed. Let him learn that it is in realization for denying his own son. Let him learn what it feels like to be helpless and alone.
The mother will loose everything. I suggest you make her homeless. She was full of pride once. Let her learn to live despised and alone.
| lemongrass chapter 12 . 7/29
Love it so much!
| LeeMarieJack chapter 9 . 7/28
Sorry, but I had to ask; do you think the Seattle police might be looking for a missing person? Perhaps Dean's little group took care of that as efficiently as they emptied Sam's apartment.
| LeeMarieJack chapter 7 . 7/28
What a nice home they have. I particularly enjoyed your description of the Sun Room.
| LeeMarieJack chapter 6 . 7/28
That was a nice domestic chapter, organizing the inhabitants and the surroundings for the story. You always need one of these to establish the scene for a story.
| LeeMarieJack chapter 5 . 7/28
That was an exiting chapter. I was just a touched surprised at Sam's reaction to Dean when first waking up. Punching Dean in the face I can understand but screaming like a twelve year old and running away? Sorry. I think more of Sam than that. Picking up the nearest heavy object and bashing Dean over the head? Ok I could live with that. Sam's a grown up, a very big grown up. I could have done without the scream very well.
| Yana5 chapter 12 . 7/28
| NetMyne01 chapter 12 . 7/28
Yeah! Please to see that Dean confided in Sam and that Sam was able to help. Great update.
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 12 . 7/28
I really like it! **
| SamDeanLover28 chapter 12 . 7/28
| LeeMarieJack chapter 2 . 7/28
A love affair, how very charring . Dean does make a very pretty vampire.
| freakygirl26 chapter 12 . 7/27
Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!