Reviews for Avoid
satomika chapter 1 . 6/27/2015
Nice ending!

It really gripped my heart!
hannah june chapter 1 . 9/20/2013
hi there,this is very good one..i liked it a lot.. I hopre there will be a sequel of this story.
untouchable hexing witch chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
Another awesome story! Thank you!
jhopayy chapter 1 . 6/2/2013
You are an amazing writer. It was so incredibly hot the way he just took control. I love when he forced the door open, and the detail of how he closed her door and stripped his clothes off walking back towards the bed. So descriptive and definitely better than how I would picture his actions. He's so effing hot and you made him hotter! I love the detail of your citrus material. You've inspired me!
rabie bunny - nour makky chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
wuuu *i'm sobbing* yes believe it.

it's very touching 3 love ya for that :)
SkeletoNQueeN06 chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
you really know how to make that lazy nara looks like a complete bastard in the first place.. and i give you a credit for that.. hahahaha99x! xD i enjoy and very pleased in a dark kind of way.. hohoho.. you know, i like the way that you describe shikamaru during whatever event happen on hokage place.. i imagined he looks much, much more manlier for some lazy ass.. hahaha.. no flame... just kidding.. hehehe :) anyway i like your story.. looking forward for some fantasy series from you.. hehehehe.. nice to k0nw you by the way.. :] XD
SkeleTonQueen06 chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
wow! I'm actually impressed! It was a god damn story! I like it! hakahak (Pervert state)
Oncloudnine chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
I liked it...shikamaru's personality was surprisingly straightforward... made me laugh a little at the end cuz I didn't expect Chouji to punch him! Awesome fic
MysticRuins22 chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
I love this! It was such a great read! And I think you wrote everyone perfectly!
Butterfly1293 chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
I enjoyed reading the story :) But mind if I berate a little? LOL... No matter how drunk "SHE" is... and no matter how you put her as "someone" who just got drunk and end up doing that with Shika... I still can't get my business out of it, I mean.. I cant stop hating her, much more that in this story, she proved to be a one hellava of a bitch.

P.S the "she" here does not refer to Ino, if you want to find out who... then read it for yourselves and Enjoy.

Thanks for the story.
RainbowLove06 chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
Amazing Story!:)
swagyeol chapter 1 . 3/10/2011

bravo D':

i seem to always cry with joy at the end of your stories x.x

i think their that good ;D

excellentness -w-

kgirl50 chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
such an amazing story! iloved it

H3art Star chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
Oh my god such a sweet ending

i really love your stories

wonderful :D
loverofallthings chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
Love it.
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