Reviews for Ghost in the shell of Abby
SazzyJacks chapter 5 . 3/26/2010
this is going 2 b really gd! i can tell! :) its been gr8 so far! :) cant wait 4 more! :)
kanskyny chapter 5 . 3/21/2010
have to ask- what is an athamame?
Dolphin64575 chapter 5 . 1/17/2010
great story! nice plot, but why did Tony have to kill Tim? couldn't it have been some random guy?

also, what's Athamame?
Erin Lycan chapter 5 . 7/19/2009
Someone is going to stop her I hope or she stops. Great chapter update real soon plz
drowzee insomniac chapter 4 . 7/17/2009
Thanks for the update. I hate it when authors do this, but real life is more important. I hope things get better soon for you. I look forward to seeing updates when you get back. :D
lunarmoth131 chapter 3 . 7/12/2009
I like it! Write more soon!
Piper -loves you chapter 2 . 6/26/2009
O.o

Wow. Not liking the evil-Tony thing. D:

Haha, I really want to see where this goes though.

Do you have a beta?

The writing isn't bad (at all!), but I got distracted from the story by some mistakes. If you don't, I can help you (if you want) and if you do...get a new one?

Sorry if I sound like a total ass.

-Piper
lunarmoth131 chapter 2 . 6/24/2009
Wow was that a surprise. I'm really curious to see what will happen next! Write more soon!
ShinigamiApples chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
moar would be good, i wanna see where its headed to

xx
Kiefer chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Oh yes continue please, it reminds me of a couple which I know.
VillageVoice chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
You must continue. I have a question though...what is the major pairing throughout the story?
drowzee insomniac chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
I say keep going too! One question though, is this an Abby/Ziva fic or a Mcgee/Abby fic?
callmeCarter0807 chapter 1 . 5/29/2009
KEEP GOING!