|Reviews for When Anything Goes|
| AlmostHeaven chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
Okay, really curious now... More please?
| flowerfaerie17 chapter 1 . 6/30/2009
What on Earth is up with Sheppard? I really wanna know so next part please. :)
| nemisis-gem chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
i'm sorry, but this is good - the ending made me laugh - keep going!
| The chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Well, McKay's complaining is right there. Sheppard seems out of character, but that could be how you're writing him, since his actions are really shocking Rodney (and I, too, would really like to find out what John meant by, "One of these days you'll be mine. That'll be a pretty sad day, McKay"). You have a few typos here and there, but nothing too distracting (a missing apostrophe, a dropped "s"-those kinds of things). So, I really hope you continue because I'd love to see where this goes.