Reviews for Moon Eyed Vs Chreey Blossom Reedited
Guest chapter 5 . 9/28/2016
What's is your obsession with anal
Guest chapter 3 . 9/28/2016
You make alot of spelling errors
Guest chapter 2 . 8/22/2015
The writing needs a little work but it's a great story so far
fellow write chapter 16 . 5/26/2015
Us qotse next time. Like "i want you" said naruto this go for only as much as ive read ill comment on anything else as it pops into my mindAwsome
Guest chapter 3 . 4/3/2015
Guest chapter 2 . 12/20/2014
basic story line, unbelieavable plot and then the worst is that you dont evan dignify to write decent sized chapters, talk about being a lazy writer 20 words down and you consider it a chapter... dont make me laugh pathetic atempt for a pathetic writter as usual in fanfic these days.
Guest chapter 12 . 10/18/2014
Your grammar sucks
Guest chapter 8 . 8/30/2014
1. Chapters too short, 2. Work on your Vocabulary, 3. Fix the sentences so we know WHEN they are talking and WHEN they are thinking!.
Guest chapter 4 . 1/30/2013
the story was brilliant. you are awesome bro. But nxt time try to make the lemons off
Guest chapter 3 . 1/30/2013
not trieng to be a douche but, could you improve your grammer a bit. But by all means keep up the story i love the plot already
Naruto greatest fan chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
keller chapter 7 . 7/9/2012
Sharingan thats how you spell it you have crap spelling no offence
venom90 chapter 20 . 6/23/2012
add me too. and I'd to add they'll be loosing a lot of readers as well, or should i say ''fans''.
anon chapter 4 . 4/9/2012
sorry i have to tell you there is a lot of errors in spelling and wording it really needs to be gone through thoroughly and have the punctuation put in in the right spots i might seem kind of petty but it is getting hard to understand what is going on even in the other chapters and I am sorry to say that it isn't getting any better as i read through and i know that this is an adopted story but it is still pretty bad so far and i am starting on the fourth chapter now so i hope it will get better
Guest chapter 2 . 4/1/2012
ironically misspell is one of the most misspelled words. weird huh?
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