Reviews for Water
Ayrmed chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
That was beautiful and so inherently Hinata.
isha1012 chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
that story was awesome!
hiNAru Aburame chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
... wow, mmmm, cute...

Greetings. n_n
dragonball256 chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
Man such an awesome and descriptive story... Definatley feed my NaruHina hunger... Great work
kiuibi123 chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
eryv chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
Amazing. Intoxicating. Addictive. This was just brilliant.
zerokurou chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
wow!This is one of the most beautiful fic that I read which made me cry, in a while!Thanks a lot!Love it!~sobs~
dragunzahurr chapter 1 . 8/10/2009

that was beautiful.

i normally don't like these types of fics, but that was amazing.

simply amazing.
rperodin chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
I found your story to be very good and very well written.

Thank you.
Silver Warrior chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
a rather dramatic piece. Pleasantly well done. Though Hiashi's about-face was, well, a little inconceivable.
taintedlegacy chapter 1 . 7/10/2009
Such a cute story...
Cherokee chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
That was so beautiful. I actualy cried!
TheMaskedCollector chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
That was simply beautiful.
MlleMisanthrope chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
A good story, but rather confusing at points. When you mentioned a wand and 'gryffindor' I was thrown for a loop. I thought it was a cross over for a moment.

Their were many misspellings.

A simple proof read would make this story perfect.
Wolfie-Wa1614 chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
that was... just... wow... just wow. Wow is seriously the only way to describe it.

But you should edit it a bit, (I hate to be a... what's it called? A prude? Maybe... that sounds right.) some words are spelled wrong (wile while)or have an extra letter. Just simple things like that, but fix those and reading tends to be easier and better :) (Am I flaming? I feel like I'm flaming... I try not to flame but every time I try and help I feel like I'm flaming )
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