|Reviews for This Could Be the Start|
| Michael Sharkey chapter 7 . 5/12
I just found the story, and read all seven chapters in one clip. Kind of spoils the "Tune in next time" vibe! I'm curious how you will handle Peter's fate. He can't die (I presume) - but he has to seem dead, so convincingly that even Emma gives up.
His resemblance to Steed is a nice tie-in with Forget Me Not. Their initial meeting, where she attacks him, is another reminder of that future episode, i.e. it's the same way he meets Tara. Perhaps at the end here, Peter will likewise be watching from a high window, with a heavy heart, while seeing himself/Steed drive off with Emma.
| Turner69 chapter 6 . 2/17
Excellent so far but to sad, you did not continue
| JEREMY chapter 6 . 1/24/2014
| JEREMY chapter 3 . 1/24/2014
It's a trip just visualizing how this would look as a TV ep.
Very muich like the radio dramas of the '30s and '40s.
ENJOYING THIS SO FAR.
| JEREMY chapter 1 . 1/24/2014
We all had to start somewhere.
I would subtitle stories in this series (in light of recent film success with a similar title),
and call it STEED & MRS. PEEL.
No Assembly Required.
| MrsEmmaPeel chapter 6 . 10/10/2012
Aw. Poor Mr Peel. Feel so sorry for him being locked up and missing Emma. But at least they are letting him live nicely and not in a run down looking prison cell. Glad to see that Emma and Steed made it okay from the mine exploding on the road from under their jeep. I would have been scared to death on being kill by being blown up or by breaking my neck from the impact of the car being flipping over. Good thing they had their seat-belts fastened. I couldn't help but laugh when the guide suggested for them to take the Tarzan route to avoid any more mines by not touching the ground. Nice touch to the story of them in the jungle. Makes me think of that episode "Small Game for Big Hunters" where they said, "Me Steed, Me Emma." Or something like that. I thought of Tarzan and Jane right away during that scene. And now reading this makes me think of that episode. lol. Can't wait to see what happens next. Hope you reply soon! But if it takes a little while then I understand. Good luck!
| MrsEmmaPeel chapter 5 . 10/10/2012
Nice new chapter. Glad to see that you finally was about to update. It's been a while since I last read this story. I had to skim through it a 2nd time to refresh my memory on some things. I laughed when Mrs Peel had to share a bed with Steed and also with Emma finding nothing but naughty things in his jacket pocket while trying to save him from the large spider. Very well though out and written. Now, I'll go and read the next new chappy. :)
| shadowsamurai83 chapter 5 . 7/17/2011
Brilliant update. I loved the comment about the handcuffs! :D Looking forward to the next chapter.
| shadowsamurai83 chapter 4 . 4/2/2011
The way you've written this, it's so perfectly Avengers. The right amount of everything, I can really see this happening! Fantastic, I love it, and I hope you'll update soon. :) Oh, and as far as I know, the Portuguese was fine. ;)
| MrsEmmaPeel chapter 4 . 3/12/2011
I hope you will update soon. I miss seeing your chapter alerts saying that there is a new chapter up. Can't wait to see what happens next with Emma and Steed. Happy Writing! :D
| MrsEmmaPeel chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
I love the 4th chapter. Had lots of humor. I was expecting that with them in their condition. lol. I wished it was longer though. Half way through the chapter I was starting to get all into it again while reading it when I noticed I was toward the end of it. lol. Hopefully you will make some longer ones in the future. If you do take all the time you need in the world. Know how it is when you have to sit down and think up what happens next. It can take up some good time to thinking it all over. So take all the time you need in the world.
Love that the scene in the story is set in a ezotic jungle in South America. I always wanted to picture Emma and Steed in a different enviroment as this. Makes me think of Tomb Raider or Indiana Jones, but with spy agents instead. lol. Great job with this one. Can't wait to see the funny scene coming up with Emma and Steed having to discuss the room matters on sharing a room. lol. Thats going to be interesting. hehe. Hopefully they stick with it. I would love to see them having to share a bed or having Emma make Steed sleep on the floor or the coach. lol. Or one of them accidently pushes the other out of the bed on fighting over who takes the covers in the middle of the night. lol. I can see some humor going into this or romance. Romance is good too. lol. GREAT JOB! :D
| MrsEmmaPeel chapter 3 . 2/25/2011
Yes I have read this chapter. I've meant to leave a comment on it, but didn't have time the other day.
I really enjoyed this chapter. Loved the action and suspense and also the part where Emma and Steed had to jump out of a plane and use Steed's brolly to help lower them safely down into the trees. lol. I laughed on thinking that Emma had to take her shirt off and use it to tie it around her and Steed to help support them both on the way down. Just picturing Emma jumping out of a plane wearing nothing but a bra and her black leather pants while holding on to Steed was priceless. I can't wait to read chapter 4. I can sense something funny coming up after they finally land in the trees with them still tied together and Emma wearing only her bra. lol. Great job on this chapter. :D
| MrsEmmaPeel chapter 2 . 2/23/2011
I love this story so far, but why did you name Emma Peel's husband John Peel when his first name is Peter? I'm just wondering. I'll let it slide, because this is fanfiction and anything can happen in fanfiction. hehe. :D
| Yuti-Chan chapter 2 . 6/7/2009
Awesome story so far, please update soon!
| Yuti-Chan chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
Great beginning of the story :D But I think Mr. Peel's first name was Peter.