Reviews for darkness
ikleholly12 chapter 1 . 3/20/2010
helloo guys :)

thankyou soo much for you reviews! im actually quite proud of this story :)

haha sory about that last chapter, the story was too serious so i couldnt resist really,

hope heartbeat is back soon! last 9 episodes left :O im going to cry :'(

Im writing the next chapters :) x

Holly x
Rollieo 122 chapter 8 . 3/7/2010
Hahahahahaha! Geoff's not very lucky, is he? Seems like they had a bit of fun in the snow...

Cool chapter (pardon the pun!), and I hope there'll be more soon!

Rollieo 122
NerdGirl'x chapter 8 . 3/6/2010
Ha Ha Love It! Don And Geoff Seriously Remind Me Of A Little Married Couple Who Always Argue, But Like Each Other Really Maybe I'm Just Crazy Lol, Anyway This Story Is Amazing ( :
Rollieo 122 chapter 7 . 12/21/2009
Aw! Poor Danny (I agree with Joe, that was definitely bad timing!)!

And poor Joe as well! I feel really sorry for him, especially as the hospital smell reminds him of going to see his mum, poor thing! (I think someone needs to give Joe a hug, and I'd happily volunteer!)

Awesome chapter, and I hope there's more soon!

Rollieo 122
Rollieo 122 chapter 6 . 9/1/2009
Hahaha! Dawn, Gina and Oscar ganging up on Peggy was hilarious (even if Dawn got sent off)!

I feel sorry for Joe, being put on traffic patrol with Geoff when there was a serious assault which is way more important (not to Miller, obviously)...

And I'd really hate to be Don (you know, covered in nettle rash)... At least he got the nettle rash sorted...

Another great chapter, I hope there's more soon!

Rollieo 122
Rollieo 122 chapter 5 . 9/1/2009
Hahaha! Nice to see Don still has a sense of humour, even when he's covered in nettle rash (shouldn't he probably do something about that, rather than suffer in silence?)... His joke was kinda funny (even though Geoff didn't get it!)... Everyone's mean to Geoff, aren't they (but then, he doesn't normally do anything about it...)?

Oh dear, Joe... I think he should probably do what Miller asked him to do, otherwise he's gonna be in serious trouble!

Anyway, brilliant chapter, and I hope there's more soon!

Rollieo 122
Rollieo 122 chapter 4 . 8/1/2009
Great chapter! I thought it was hilarious when Don fell in the nettles and Joe was being really unsympathetic...

Please update soon!

Rollieo 122
Rollieo 122 chapter 3 . 6/19/2009
Poor Joe, and all the others! I really hope she survives!

Please update soon!

Rollieo 122
Rollieo 122 chapter 2 . 6/2/2009
Poor Joe! And poor Carol too!

I feel really sorry for Joe...

Please update soon, I really want to find out what happens!

Rollieo 122
bubblygummmX chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
hehe holly,

this is cruel, nicely written (:

update soon xx
Rollieo 122 chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
Ah, no! Not Carol!

Major cliffhanger! Please write more, I really need to know what happens!

Rollieo 122
sheepqueen chapter 1 . 5/30/2009

suspense! :O lol

amazing start, love the description.

more soon? ;D