Reviews for Finding Himself
Salogma chapter 17 . 12/14/2009
This one's hilarious.
Salogma chapter 5 . 12/14/2009
Ah. . . I simply love these.
cccahill18 chapter 17 . 9/20/2009
Great point to bring in for this collection of oneshots! Horrible's laugh was really something that signified the change in him, and I think it is really important to mention it!
EverythingYouEver chapter 17 . 9/3/2009
Loves it :)
Kaydance chapter 16 . 8/22/2009
The title definitely fits this oneshot.

A well-written conveyance of the feeling.
jamie55 chapter 15 . 8/17/2009
aww! Poor little Billy buddy sick at home and deliriously dreaming of laundry day and bank robberies!

I love how you added the last bit about freezing time and no happy ending and his.. well his otehr dreams - the not-happy ones...

Awesome job Donne!
jamie55 chapter 14 . 8/17/2009
Oh... I had to check the comments to guess who H was.


Hourglass right? Makes sense *facepalm*

Oh I wish she had time to tell him... more.. *sigh*
cccahill18 chapter 16 . 8/17/2009
I liked the little bit at the end, with the burnt-out lightbuld representing Horrible's own mental/social darkness. Poor guy /
cccahill18 chapter 15 . 8/16/2009
Ah, the stomach flu, quite a miserable time! The jumpy thoughts and the transitions between being awake and asleep were a good way to get across all of his feelings at this time in his life.
jamie55 chapter 13 . 8/13/2009
-That's all it was, he reminded himself. An obsession. Certainly not love. If it had really been love, it would be far too much for one man to bear.



I love that line BTW.

Actually this might be my fave part to date. Anyways, sorry about the slight gap between reviews - got distracted :)

Keep up the good work - oh and I checked out the lyrics on your LJ, I can see why they were so inspiring!
jamie55 chapter 11 . 8/13/2009
aw... too many awws I know - but... *whimpers* I like Penny... I know, I know, he'll have to get over her and all but... I really like Penny. I'm a Penny fan ;) This kinda comment is more appropriate on LJ isn't it?

The lyrics were nice though - kinda funny - I wish I could hear a melody.
jamie55 chapter 10 . 8/13/2009
Hello! (I'm a bad reader and catching up )

Ergo: AW!

Billy bought the yogurt for the both of them! That's so sad and so brilliant - you're brilliant!

And aww..

ok next!
SG1SamFan chapter 14 . 8/4/2009
Guh. This one hit hard. Poor innocent Billy. Little did he know that this was a portrait of his innocence lost. :-(

Thanks for posting!

cccahill18 chapter 14 . 8/3/2009
Interesting having the drawing being a manifestation of Billy's dreams . . .he can literally watch himself turn into his "hero" (so to speak) on the wall.
Kaydance chapter 14 . 8/1/2009
Hourglass? )

Good descriptions and whatnot. Your stories are very easily visualized.

Also, "goggles, he hoped, he’d always liked goggles". Who doesn't like goggles...? Steam-punky. 3
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