|Reviews for You're Not Lucky, You're Just Crazy|
| Kunal.19 chapter 1 . 11/9/2016
aww... it was so sweet.. and I love it
though it has some grammatical mistakes...like imoto doesn't followed by 'chan' or any of Japanese honorific ... and yui was a little ooc in first part... but anyway I love it..
keep it up..!
| Relevantxxx chapter 1 . 8/22/2015
Lovely one shot3 Although I would of loved for them to get caught in the end by the band members...xD Teeheehee
| Dakimomoe chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
Were those, moaning... dialogues really necessary?
Lol it's just, unexpected. Anyways, at least it was fluffy, at the end.
| Obsidian And Cobalt chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
Epic win...I need a cold shower XD
| Cornie chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Please, I beg you! Follow it! Do not leave it in only one chapter, the story is too good :D!
| Major Mike Powell III chapter 1 . 4/25/2011
Well, well, soldier...
LOL At Ritsu and Azusa's begging. Too...much...moe Powa'! X_x
Oh yeah, and...The cake is a lie!
Sorry! I just HAD to say that! XD
And THEN! WHOA!
THAT'S what I call "making out"! :DDDDDD THAT was...just...X3
And of course, the mushy talk and the "I love you"s were just an added bonus! O
Helluva job, marine!
Semper-Fi! Carry on!
| creepy fanboy chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
fap fap fap fap fap fap fap
| Hyperion184 chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
Oh please tell me you're going to continue this fic? I LOVE IT! It's well written, and it seems like something that could happen. Please update.
| Dooter-Space-Shooter chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
:] I love this, thanks for writing it
| Kode Dekka chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
if I have any complaint its the use of the word chagrin, brings back so many painful twilight related memories. But yes I creamed my pants reading this, nice work lol/
| Ignoramus 1O3 chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
What'd I say about doing yourself down? I loved it! Awesome job! :D I'm just so happy to see some proper Ui/Yui up here (my fave pairing, heh).
Perfectly cute - I can just picture them doing this in an episode - great characterisation! Keep it up! _