Reviews for Kidnapped
jk chapter 17 . 2/21
This is ridiculous! So manwhore Edward tormented Bella for years and now he gets her and her virginity as a reward?! Bella is just stupid to just giggle and forgive him everything. She deserves to get cheated on for being so stupid
zollo0416 chapter 28 . 1/19
Amazing story 3
Guest chapter 26 . 12/12/2017
You are an excellent writer, I could not stop reading- needing to know what happened next. I did not think you could have made Edward redeemable in the beginning but boy was I wrong! Now, with that being said I could not finish after this chapter. While I rooted and related to Bella in the beginning I could not believe that she left Edward. The first time she tried I was shook but kept reading. However, after the second time I tried to see how she could redeem herself and to me it wasn’t enough. For someone who states how much she loves someone and how he’s her second half she straight up chose herself. She was never willing to sacrifice anything for him the way he was for her and I lost faith in her character. I get that she was scared- maybe a little disoriented, but she let him sacrifice himself and then took forever to try to find him. You are a great story teller but in my opinion, she did not deserve Edward if she was never willing to truly put herself on the line.
PAT2024 chapter 28 . 12/8/2017
Great story. I really liked the plot and the characters. James was really evil...
I didn’t like that Bella was so long to react and do everything to find him. But all in all it was good. Thanks for sharing
Cullen Strong chapter 12 . 11/28/2017
This story is INCREDIBLE. I was so mad when I had to go to work and couldn’t keep reading haha!
jane2 chapter 23 . 9/28/2017
i hate bella. She shouldn't have left him behind! gahhh
jane2 chapter 22 . 9/28/2017
this bella is such a weakling. I wish you made her a little ballsier
Azlady2003 chapter 30 . 6/28/2017
Love it. How can edward forget that he doesn't have to use a condom...when he was learning to walk bella told him and then fucked him without a condom...Damn that was hot
neelix lee chapter 30 . 6/23/2017
Recommended on one of the twilight threads on face book, really enjoyed it
grandmachix chapter 2 . 6/23/2017
Edward is a cocky hoor. Bella is snarky, but I think it's to cover hurt because of Edward.
Judy
grandmachix chapter 1 . 6/23/2017
1st chapter A-OK. Very intriguing.
Judy
Guest chapter 5 . 5/8/2017
No issues With these people but. It's like Edward's is attracted to any female with two legs. Ugh.. That's discusting
vampwolf75 chapter 1 . 4/2/2017
loved this... you're a great writer... hope you'll write stories like this more...
JoJo Sky chapter 30 . 3/21/2017
Just finished reading this story and I enjoyed it but one thing did confuse me it was hinted in the story that Charlie was a cop but he was also partners with Carlisle in the pharmaceutical business.
Lillywhite1 chapter 30 . 3/17/2017
Thanks for writing this wonderfull story.
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