Reviews for A Torn Perfection
Person chapter 4 . 7/12/2014
Please make the last chapter
phionexxx chapter 4 . 5/9/2014
and i was so looking foward to the next chapter.. this story is now my life. it has taken over. it just makes me so happy yet sad and it makes sense.
phionexxx chapter 3 . 5/9/2014
this story hurts me but i love it so, so much.
phionexxx chapter 2 . 5/9/2014
you're an amazing writer. this has to be one of the best stories i've read on here! i've always had the headcanon that cyrus and cynthia were childhood friends (and eventually lovers, becoming ex-lovers) and i love how you've tied them together in such a way that makes sense and fulfills any headcanons or longings i had about them.
phionexxx chapter 1 . 5/9/2014
wow, just, wow. i already love this.
pokegirl chapter 4 . 1/7/2012
pleeease finish this soon...cyrus/cynthia is my favorite pairing and this is one of the best cyrus/cynthia fics i've ever read...
Leki chapter 4 . 12/29/2011
This one I'll definately be keeping up with.

I love how bitter and loving he is at the same time; so torn between his emotions. And Cynthia's unyielding happyness and duty. Both are characterized very well. I find it quite sad their so at odds, but I would have it no other way.

Favoriting and alerting instantly! I can not wait for more.
Munting-Tala chapter 4 . 5/8/2011
Are you going to finish this story? It's well written and has an interesting plot. You said to give you a virtual kick if you don't finish this story in a week, and it's been more than a year! XD

Oh, and just a heads up: The Avatar spinoff the Legend of Korra is coming out this year :)
The watcher in the dark chapter 4 . 4/24/2011
Well then if there is another chapter then /;?# send it
Jynxed Keyboard chapter 4 . 4/2/2011
It's a shame that this hasn't been updated in a while, I just stumbled upon it and I'm already captivated. Cyrus seems a whole lot more human, and your take on him is so unique and ahh, I need to see this finished!

I hope this fic sees completion. Looking forward to it. :)
icyblueicy chapter 4 . 3/28/2011
WOW..I think your story was really well done. I was just looking for a fic about Cynthia to read and your fic has turn me into a Mizuhikishipping fan!

Hope you will update soon!
Capital WHY chapter 4 . 2/10/2011
Woah. Amazing. *_*

More please please and please? I know you haven't updated in like, two years, but, uh . . . PLEASE? I love this ship!

Finessefully,

X
Marcus chapter 4 . 1/8/2011
I love this story. You make Cyrus have a crush on Cynthia (convincing) and how did he get so rich. Would be great if he could spill the beans - but Cyrus is too epic for that, yes?

Update soon, please.
Meni G chapter 4 . 12/29/2010
This is so beautifully written. I love this pairing, and you do it complete justice. I hope you continue writing!
pokegirl chapter 3 . 11/13/2010
omg love it! i 3 cynthia and im a cyrus/cynthia fan. and this is just amazing.

only bad thing: if i try 2 write a cyrus/cynthia fanfic it'll seem stupid now. lolz.
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