|Reviews for American Boy|
| NatesMomma chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
I'm so excited that you got the first chapter of this story out already. I can't beleive he already bought the ring! Ask her already Edward!
| L-Anne Cullen chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Thank you for posting so soon! I love this story! AWESOME first chapter. I'm glad that Esme and Carlisle are more loving now! ;o}
| carebear309 chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
props on getting the sequeal out so soon. Looking forward to seeing how it unfolds.
Don't tell me after all Edward and Bella have been through that they are getting cold feet about marriage now? It's nice that Emmett and Rosalie are engaged but it seems a little cliche that they or Jasper/Alice are the first ones to get engaged all the time.
Looking forward to the road trip. Can't wait to see what kind of drama ensues!
| Joykohl chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
Sadly, I have not visited any two story outhouses. Frankly, I'd feel bad for the lower person if the holes were aligned... I can't wait to see where the road trip takes Edward and Bella! Thank you so much for making a sequel!
| Trisha Whitlock chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
no on the outhouses but yes on the awesomeness of this chapter
can't wait to read the update :)
| ar080185 chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
I'm so glad this is finally up. :D :D :D :D :D
It sounds really really great so far.
I feel pretty dumb knowing this but there is a two story outhouse in Illinois. Not sure exactly where it is. When I was little my parents use to take me, my brother, and my sister to random places around Indiana, it was one of them.
| MaggieMay14 chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
Great work I love it so far! I am so excited for Rosalie and Em! I love that Edward already has the ring for Bella and I can't wait to see how he proposes. Ohh how did Emmett propose to Rose? Bella so needs to find out during a girl talk moment...seeing as her and Edward were late to the BBQ!
| Naomitron chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
I've never heard of a two story outhouse. The very thought of one scares the hell out of me.
And I really like the idea of a road trip! There is so much fun to be had. Great first chapter. I can't wait to see more.
| Flightlessbird11 chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
Oh, yay I really like how this story sounds so far! although it will take some getting used to, thinking of all of them as being four years older, but you're writing it well! Hmm I wonder what Edward will be planning for the proposal? I'm glad that Renee loves him now haha Journey is a powerful thing. All 3 couples on one road trip is going to be very interesting lol I'm glad we'll get some of Travelward back though, I kinda missed him.
Great first chapter, loaded with set up!
| L5472 chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
Loved reading about what happened in the last four years, even though it was brief ] Also, go Edward for attacking her in the shower LOL.
Can't believe Rose and Em are going to get married now! *celebrates* Well, I can..but you get my point! And...Edward has a ring already... *bounces* I can't wait till he uses it!
"..because he seemed to spend most of his time fondling his girlfriend, his Xbox or himself."
LMAO! Oh Emmett...
"During our third year, after a particular hardcore session, Bella practically passed out before I could even pull out and it was only minutes later that she mumbled something about watermelons that made me laugh so hard, I had to step into our bathroom to calm myself."
Okay, that is just plain hilarious LOL. I can just imagine it!
Love that the boys are pressuring Edward. *stares sternly at Edward* Do it. Do it... *channels Starsky and Hutch*
And sorry, no idea. I'm not in the US, nor have I ever been, so I am completely useless, haha. Can't wait to see what you have in store, though!
Great first chapter. Hope you get the second out soon!
| Belle chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
i think there is one in montana...good sequel...update soon
| lovebuggkiss chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
Okay, this should be great.
And since it's American Boy will it focus more on Edward's inner thoughts and their relationship, as American Girl showed us more Bella? That would be great.
& I'm excited for the older more mature but still fun and exciting Edward and Bella. I hope we get to see into the whole babies and marriage and growing up that they do soon. :)
I'll check out some sight seeing tonight or tomorrow one and toss out some ideas you might like to add to your list. :D
Great job coldplaywhore, yet again!
I was trying to decide which fic was my favorite and out of them all I really like summer sessions, the one where Edward was older than Bella. You should do another fic like that sometime. Well not exactly like that but you know what I mean, lol. :)
| Soccer11 chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
YA what is he waiting for cant wait for the nxt ch
| vampiric love56 chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
Im liking the 1st chapter cant wait for nxt update
| lindyrb chapter 1 . 5/30/2009
Yay! Glad to see this story continued. Can't wait for the trip to start...