Reviews for Lily
Willow Smith chapter 27 . 1/17
Epic story please write more chapters. Could Ziva and Tony get married? This sends me in stitches.
marthapreston4 chapter 2 . 2/16/2015
I just figured out your a british writer
James's Baby Girl chapter 27 . 2/4/2015
love the story so far please make more
Zachattack chapter 27 . 2/4/2014
In the bedroom
It's me chapter 21 . 2/4/2014
Wonderful
Sweet
Adorable
Brilliant
Fantastic spelling
Story flow
Chapters could be longer
AZTEC 13 chapter 27 . 1/7/2014
Please make more
Kikilia14 chapter 27 . 11/30/2012
Glad I found this story... do you think you'll be updating?

Totally want to see what happens next.
LizzieOktambe chapter 27 . 11/8/2012
Are you going to keep updating or rather not? I would like that bedroom scene :)
MMWillow13 chapter 27 . 7/28/2012
heck yes to the bedroom scene!

sweet gentle chapter
CalzonaaForeverr chapter 27 . 7/28/2012
Bedroom!
PJ in NH chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Story intrigues me, I'll start to save it to put on my reader when it's complete.
acciocrazychick chapter 27 . 7/28/2012
Ah! What a great story. I love some of the things Lily says. I actually burst out laughing a couple times. Keep up the good work
Robern chapter 27 . 7/28/2012
very good!
Canada Dakota Faith Haswari chapter 26 . 4/7/2012
Love it i think i will have to do the shhh game lol
LikePistachios chapter 22 . 10/21/2011
OMG! This a great story! Please continue!
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