Reviews for Turn Around
Fluttershy 2059110 chapter 1 . 9/23/2014
Nice. Very interesting and kind of funny too.
fearinnx chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
Haha I love the ending. " now turn around I'm putting my clothes back on." X))
ulqui's-girl chapter 1 . 2/12/2012
** OH MY GOD! HOT!
Juliett Capulet chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
good job it was really hot!

one question if their handcuffed togeather how do they get their shirts off? i mean the one sleeve would just be stuck on

really not important jw

good job!
Sashocirrione chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Haha! This is funny. Thanks.
Moonlit Crystals chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
So Light gave L and blowjob... And he didn't even get his own release. That's the only thing I have to say that was negative.
Akai Naiya chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
Oh how great was that? I liked it!
AspergianStoryteller chapter 1 . 4/4/2010
*Snort* Figures L would taste sweet, considering all the sugary food he eats. Lol, it would be funny to see awkward situations like this in cannon. And I would not be surprised if L was at least bi. I just finished reading Death Note. :(
Ruka-x3 chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
That was pretty hot ;D
Beautiful Feather chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
Usually I don't like reading stories where they have them still handcuffed, but I really liked this one :P

B.F.
Potential Misfit chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
" Light licked him slowly, tasting water and precome mixed together."

i know I'm too young to be reading this, and this is proof.

I was reading this line and I thought, "WTF? What crazy fucking name is this for some shampoo?"

lol, i is dumb, but i loves your story
darkatsu midnight chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
very nice but almost to easy for light to go into such an act especally after making the fuss plus it was a little to simple for L to get a hard on but i digress it was a wonderful story and i hope to see more
bookenworum chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
Nice one. :)

I liked reading this, and I couldn't keep quiet after reading this line:

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"What? Oh," said L, realizing the source of Light's panic. "Just because I'm a super detective doesn't mean I don't have functioning reproductive organs."

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xD/ Just so true!

great fic. :P

bookenworum
MLMsky4life chapter 1 . 7/16/2009
:P Perfect YAY I always tell everyone to make it LONGER, the lemon/lime/everything, but you managed to write a good (would you call this lime or lemon?)-scene in less than...What was it? 20? Words!:D Perfect:P Perfect tension things, perfect how Light feels comfortable with L in that way Perfect characterization, perfect dialogue...PS change the 'general'-thing with 'humor', the dialogue was so funny
CrazyStarGirl chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
hahahahah

HOT the ending is funny as hell.

Love it!

*claps* good job D
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