Reviews for Ren's Song: Undiscovered
Stephane Richer chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Wow! That was a really beautiful take on Ren's death. I never thought to make the connection between his hands and Nana. It's well-thought-out and well executed.
Ann chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
Oh my.. that was so sad.. I cried whole day when Ren dyed.. :(
Sayu Koishimoto chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
Beautiful *Crying*

Damn, I already cried a lot for Ren's death...

I cried and cried and cried

And now I'm crying again.

Because I love Rain, he was so important.

And then he dies!


Awesome fic! (Y)

Nara Luisa chapter 1 . 7/26/2009
Uow! T T Its so sad Rens death! I almost cried when I read!

Anyway, I loved your idea about why he had his hands on his chest! Like, he was protecting Nana and that he does it after seeing Nanas face (the black cat and all) even the music you put had something to do like "dont walk away" and the black cat that ren sees is walking away from him! Very good! I loved it!

I just dont think it was a ring that Ren had in his pocket, the present he would give her because Nana had a ring already... I think its something as the keys to their original house ( the one they lived before Ren go to Tokyo)

Well, anyway, congratulations! Very good!

P.s: Im sorry for any language mistakes, Im from Brazil so Im still learning how to use english properly! '