Reviews for The Right Man
designation452 chapter 2 . 6/2/2009
ooh! that is such an adorable song... and the story you wrote to it is PERFECT ! FABULOUS you deserve a round of applause!


well done and it is the most beautiful story...


i wish i had a perfect man... haha

aa girl can only dream..
designation452 chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
oh that was ADORABLE! it was CUTE and HOT subtle and SEXY and guess what... i really enjoyed it! i hope you keep tis going... but the next chapter looks really interesting... i shall read on... hehe xx

Thank you!
MaleficentKnits chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
beautiful story... I really love your Alice and Jasper... *le sigh...* must run and tell my fellow Ravelry UU gals to read this one!
AmberStar63 chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Yay! Aw, I loved it...*sigh* that's so Jasper.
Twogoods chapter 1 . 6/1/2009
Aw that was sweet, D! I love Jalice stories. You did a great job with this. Glad you're on my Author alert so I never miss anything you do. Outside sex is hot!
cravingtwilight chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Dawn, I loved your story! It was wonderfully written and I loved that you did a flashback. Jasper was sexdy as hell and the connection that you created between him and alice was wonderful. Sex in the park, that was pretty hot too! Good luck in the competition! :) You've got my vote!
kirmit chapter 1 . 5/31/2009

awesomeness! I loved it and the story was soo awesome and got me all misty eyed.

I love a good wedding :}


contygoldbarg chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
*wipes tear* thAT WAS SO SWEET! and lovely! and so well writen it was original but also canon and love it

seriusly great work
luv4bunny chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
That was a very sweet and hot chapter, I liked it very much!
gracethegal chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
That was really sweet, i loved it!
Letholog1ca chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
IM so proud of you! You made it, you effind made it! He's beautiful and gorgeous and we need to clone him so hard!

The Peenateers chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
:) very nice, good luck.

It was so sweet...

Thank you for the entry :P

Love Emmy xx
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