Reviews for The Blessing and the Curse
yanxxx chapter 8 . 7/13/2009
Esme.. her sickness lies heavy in my heart. It stings my eyes to see her, and even to reminisce knowing at maybe soon she will not be there to tell those stories.

I love how she wants Edward and Bella together. I really feel how motherly she is in wanting her children to be happy and knowing that they are perfect for each other.
yanxxx chapter 7 . 7/13/2009
Why does love have to be so complicated? *sigh*

Edward loves too much and he's making it hard for Bella to show her love.

Can the love justify the hurt? :(
yanxxx chapter 6 . 7/13/2009
I am very confused about Edward. Still I want to believe there's good in him, that most of the stuff he did was for love. People do a lot of stupid things for love. I still don't understand why all the other girls, and that Alice incident. :(

Great job. The plot is carefully weaved, and is coming together beautifully.
yanxxx chapter 5 . 7/13/2009
I'm really confused on what I want for B. On one hand, I see how E wants her and she want him back, on the other hand, I don't know if she can be happy if he has that attitude.

*sigh* I'm lovin' this story babe.

(and if you're wondering why these comments are coming in rapid succession, I've read it beforehand. :D)
yanxxx chapter 4 . 7/13/2009
Manipulative and shameless.

I wonder why I still want them together.
yanxxx chapter 3 . 7/13/2009
Yep. Definitely hooked.

I love where this is going, finally a plot that piques my interest.
yanxxx chapter 2 . 7/13/2009
Very intriguing.

I love possessiveward, but he's a leetle scary.

Lovely story!
Timmer chapter 10 . 7/13/2009
Sally bb -thanks for your review reply ! Had a shitload of work to do over the weekend so didn't get a chance to review until now! Sorry !

Yes, I loved this chapter too !I just voted for you in the Indies -hope you win !If I was organizing the prizes, first prize would be unlimitless "Leto pounces"- I know you'd like that !Hhm come to think of it so would I! LOL!

I always forget to say that I love your little A/N's at the end of each chapter about what Edward will do if we review-you better make that a reality though, now that I've reviewed and voted for you:)

Anyway about this chapter, I said it all pretty much over at the thread but you left me reeling after reading this one -pretty much like Edward there at the end !It was very powerful writing !

Fav bits: "Her pulse felt like a fingertip softly tapping at her throat. Faster now".

And:

"Bella would think later, that the strangest thing was this.

She had rehearsed this exposition of the New Years Eve fiasco more than any other fantasy when cocooned in her bed. She had dreamed of hurting him, knocking the breath from him, exerting cruelty and power over him".

Can't wait for more ! Oh and thanks for the 2 updates last week !

XOXO

Mella
edwards-debussy chapter 10 . 7/12/2009
Wow-just found your story yesterday, and I am totally in love with its Gothic feel. Edward is indeed a bastard, but I do think that despite how messed up he is, he does love Bella. I just can't quite figure out why his feelings get so twisted and he hurts her so.

Glad that Bella finally told him just how badly he hurt her on NYE, and then hit him with so much other stuff that she's been carrying with her, all a result of his actions towards her, and that it finally got through to him. Can't wait to get his side next. Great update!
AAAC chapter 10 . 7/12/2009
Amazing. I had seen this fic recced over and over on the WA boards, and finally took the time to read it. A nice play on the characters. Not that sickly sweet Edward we get so often. I actually laughed a few times during the scene between Edward and Emmett with Bella's cell phone. Too funny. He is such a little shit, and you have to love it. Very intrigued by what is happening here. Did he think that Bella wanted him to be with Alice? Can't wait to hear his side. He clearly loves her, right? Will anxiously await your next chapter!
ClaraTiara chapter 10 . 7/12/2009
I loved the piece on Bella's memory of that night. It was so well written, the red dress, the lipstick...Ah! It was perfect. I really really can't wait to read your next entry.
jezzeria chapter 10 . 7/12/2009
Wow that was intense. Im glad bella did it though, maybe now Edward can understand her better, and they can heal from this and becoming stronger...together?
celesticbliss chapter 6 . 7/12/2009
Looving this so far!

Thanks to the lovelies at the Wide Awake board on IMDb who pointed me in your direction! 33
adhita chapter 10 . 7/12/2009
Dear Sally:

I stumbled into your story while looking for some good Dark Edward stories and I loved yours. I really like that you take care with your spelling and grammar because Ive read some interesting stories that become just horrible because of the lack of care in the writing.

In your story Edward is really complex and intense, what i like the most is that he isn't a vampire and yet he has a very dark and possessive nature. I liked that, by ch. 10, he is finally realizing some of the hurt and damage he has done to Bella with his egocentric nature. The sexual side of him is really hot too!

I hope you make Bella stronger and make Edward struggle more to finally win her heart and her body.

Are you going to explain if Edwards "talent" works with everyone or only with Bella? And how does he "read" her thoughts, like an inner dialogue, images, or both?

I hope you update frequently because I'm addicted to your story now and will be checking any other Twilight fanfic that you post.

Congratulations on your good writing!
zara nicole whitlock chapter 10 . 7/12/2009
please do update soon. really can't wait for edward's side of the story. :)
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